Zhang Fei: He is different from Ling Yun, who was innocent and dependent on Ling Xi at the beginning of the story. He is decisive from the beginning, maybe because he is a demon.
Zhang Fei: He is also different from Chen Li, who often hesitates in making decisions and often takes time to solve problems at the beginning of the story.
Zhang Fei: He is more similar to Xia Tian, who doesn't depend on others, but he also doesn't hesitate to ask for help if he encounters difficulties.
Zhang Fei: He is caring and affectionate towards those closest to him. He is decisive in making decisions, but he always acts with caution and careful calculation. He was extremely cruel and merciless, and he even dared to kill his big brother, who tried to kill him first. He is cunning and does not hesitate to take advantage of anyone who can benefit him and those closest to him, both men and women.
Read a few chapters. They were fun, i like this style. keep it up.
Flow of the story is a bit jittery, with lack of commas and spacings in some spots. Paragraphing can have a little more work done, because reading a block of texts is never fun.
Characters are great, despite the jittery quality of writing you can tell the characters have at least more depth than the skin.
World background? Gradual introduction...?
Eh, but at least it's somewhat believable, despite the fact that having languages from different worlds be so similar is slightly too unlikely. Unless we are dealing with multiverse type of transmigration/reincarnation.
Overall, 4/5 stars. Obviously, English can be improved, but no one is perfect.
Totally my style!
There aren't that many original novels that include entertainment and a system like yours and mine.
I've got to say, it's very interesting.
It kinda makes me want to start publishing again..
Keep up the good work!
You make flowers bloom and stars collide with your choice of words in this novel. A lot of pretty faces could waste my time but you're my dream author. I wish you could do more stories like this
Its an amazing story of qing chen to be continues more curiosity
I like qin chen as a hero of the story.the most interesting part of story when qin chen meet his father.
Well great start no weak to strong mc directly op mc
Great good vocublary now 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters
please anyone know the raw of this novel? or atleast this novel other name. i already search but i cannot find it. .
This book is very excellent if you can change your ride it I can't wait to read what else you decide to write the characters are wonderful and I just enjoy it so much I thank you Arthur for your time and your patience Sincerely your fan
Evil mc I hope the author keep like this I’ enjoying reading this novel if u r looking for evil mc that slaughter and do anything to level up this u go btw I hope the author doesn’t introduce poison to the novel or harem or romance m
It's been three years since the author last published the last chapter and she still hasn't in updated any more chapters, so I want to ask, is the author still alive?
If you're, at least leave the name of the novel in its original language so we can continue reading.
honestly I have to drop, the mc is just an extremely naive and frustrating character he genuinely made me feel like ripping my hair out