Story seems interesting enough. Basically, dude is transferred over to another world. Said dude finds out there is a vr game that uses weapons from his world that was probably not seen in the world he is in. He decides to jump in and play in hopes of figuring out exactly how he got to the other world. Mc as a character isn't annoying, but remarkably average in a sense. Not the fault of the MC, but the author hasn't put the MC in situations where we could see more of his personality or capitalized on those moments where we could see his personality. Out of the 10 chapters so far, I think only one was dedicated to the real world while the other nine were in the vr world. Interestingly enough, the MC is like a super solo player and has had no interactions with other people besides pking. Overall I think this is going to be a fun read, but ten chapters is seriously too short to figure stuff like this out.
Its a novel with a great start but after chapter 80 the author is off the main story rails and tons of fillers and rubbish characters overshadow the mc and main plot. It may make the story full of depth but unneccessary plotholes is just showing the author is running out of steam and shooting airplanes randomly.
For new readers who don't know, this novel translates into GravityTales until chapter 96 TOTALLY FREE! Webnovel seriously ... If I am personally going to read and pay for the chapters (not the 96 that are already free and here they are charging) instead of chapter 97 onwards, before that I will not pay anything. I feel sorry for GravityTales because the chapters chapters are a copy and paste of their translation and I feel disgusted with Webnovel, not for stopping the translation of the novel in GravityTales but for taking someone else's work to copy their work and paste it disgustingly while it is free elsewhere, they will charge for those chapters (5 or 6 SS minimum) You know, go to GravityTales, read until Chapter 96 for free and, if you like it, continue from 97 onwards, I don't think there is a reason to do so since they had at least a week to translate Chapter 97 into less
I don't usually read novels like these so I don't know the standard for one, but this book is very well written. Especially since it was by a new author I'm amazed actually. I read up to 15 chapters and I'm liking it thus far, it's slow-paced but that's how I like em. I'll continue reading hoping it entertains me even more.
Mao ni novels are different from regular cn novels that are full of cliche, repeatative tropes and fluff.Mao ni novels have well thought of plots, full of literature (like poems and qoutes), descriptive paragraphs.For sure, not everyone prefers this. Writing style is a bit heavier compare to shallow and easy to understand novels. It might take a while for thing to get interesting. But it is worth taking note of, mao ni novels are different from others of it genre
Mr author are you still alive? You haven't published for many days.
Seeing many people made bad reviews with avarage 3☆s or so, I decided to join in.The story, ch 19, is quite good as far as I read. It involved an MC with ability that can allow her to play a role in a story. The story is a work of an actual author there in her reality. So, the act she does there will affect the storyline of the actual novel/manga in real life. I consider it good because:1. The ln not really rushing, she is not really op.2. She is a girl that think that she is just a ur-avarage-jane-doe and it's the way she was. (It just recently that she has some people recognise her)3. She is a traveler. You understand, that kind of novel that travel to new body, new life etc etc), but that didn't made her to know everything and can do every sort of amazing things like how usually other mc does. 4. Her real life is describing about novel author, how webnovel author got his payment, all sort of things author may be thought while writing his/her novel and manga. It just made readers know about author's line of thinking. Lastly, I'm not really know how this novel will progress in the future as right now there is only some 19 or so chapters, but that is all I can review so far. Thanks for you whoever read this. If you see some newly released novel(or maybe even the old one), please read some 5-10 ch to judge whether the ln is good or no before you all give a review.I just recently know that author just paid 5 cent for 1000 words/one reader. The pay is actually not that high-(exception if the ln is well known or it's popularity is high)Even if Qi really applied payment system for this app, I think that most of the money should go to the author pocket and not the corporation!! Give right to author!!! Yeayeayea!!P. SDo forgive me if my grammar is hard to understand as there's may be many wrong spelled and mistyping words or wrong grammar! I am satisfied as long as you understand what am I saying!!-Best regards, a sincere reader.
Good novel. Slow start but is very exciting later on. Very complex plot but still manages to hook your attention and doesn't appear overloaded. Cold and smart protagonist who very rarely does stupid mistakes. And even if he does it's psychologically understandable. If you're looking for happy to lucky face slapping, please move on. But if you're looking for a novel with good plot progression and almost realistic characters who are hellbent on destroying each other and themselves, this might be for you. Beware: this novel is BRUTAL.
Thx for the updates ? great story. Update soon
Not sure how's it gonna go. Half of the Xuahuans or Xianzias are copy paste work of each other.I have hopes for it, since the name suggests something related to alchemy. But for once I would like the author to deal with alchemy as a science and not some hocus pocus.Most of the alchemist books are "Throw in Seven Petal White Lotus ( or another mouthful name ) and slowly roast it in divine fire. Once it starts liquidating throw in 1000000000000000 year ginger and heat them together.Boy, you are not making a sandwich. It's like someone's cooking after having a go on YouTube. And how are the ingredients always so uniform and same. Two petals, two roots, a piece of bark...Are all the herbs from a same template, having uniform structure}?At least have some standard measurements. Like 200g of roots and 350g of bark, heated at 1000°, for n amount of hours. It's like amteur making his morning smoothie.Anyway, hoping for a sensible book and not another WDDG or something. Fingers crossed, and a welcome in advance to another thrash and bullied MC, with 15 years delayed luck.(That's how most of the stories go?)
Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
as of so far it is a good story. Not overly nationalistic but that could change further along. I always love a good farming story although I hesitate when it's an urban one but will give it a shot