The Doornations

English needs to be improved.  It's the only thing that's keeping me from giving this story a perfect score. Characters are well fleshed out. It's easy to fall in love with the protagonist Jun Hua, whether as herself or her male alter-ego, Jun Min. Reading is like watching bishounen anime, with a full dose of heroic beautiful men. Lots of action, intrigue, humor, and romance. Thankfully the writing has enough flow and sense, despite the poor grammar, to be understood. The plot itself is worth plodding through the grammar bombs. I hope Author Sorahana will find an editor to polish this novel, as it has great potential.

Great novel? The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it?

Story seems interesting enough. Basically, dude is transferred over to another world. Said dude finds out there is a vr game that uses weapons from his world that was probably not seen in the world he is in. He decides to jump in and play in hopes of figuring out exactly how he got to the other world. Mc as a character isn't annoying, but remarkably average in a sense. Not the fault of the MC, but the author hasn't put the MC in situations where we could see more of his personality or capitalized on those moments where we could see his personality. Out of the 10 chapters so far, I think only one was dedicated to the real world while the other nine were in the vr world. Interestingly enough, the MC is like a super solo player and has had no interactions with other people besides pking. Overall I think this is going to be a fun read, but ten chapters is seriously too short to figure stuff like this out.

It's pretty good cause the MC has brain. Although there's a loophole like in 3 chapter the MC has max level but in chapter 15 his attribute is the same as a level 1 character in normal game. Or maybe in the novel level 1 character has 1 point in every attribute, who know.

I way prefer the whole VRMMO but now is a real world over the standard "VRMMO but go back 2 years". The whole 'this company spent millions designing content for only one player to get' or 'unfair advantages for the first player' or 'secret systems that no of the other millions of players think of' just are dumb. People aren't that stupid, and I appreciate it when an author doesn't lower the IQ of humanity by 100 points so their main character can dominate.

"It looks like we have a new resident."