Dropped chapter 2
First chapter give impression mc is intelligent due to being a consultant and multimillionaire that quickly changes into him being given millions due to death of parents
And dialogue is terrible
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good enough, keep up your good work author-san...........
A very well-written and translated novel truly I was hoping for popcorn trash and found it was actually a gem instead. I insist you read at least 20 Chapters the starting is a bit slow and boring but after that, it gets more interesting Can't wait for more chapters There's no harem, or at least it doesn't seem like it will. Also for people complaining about cheat when u read later, u will realize that the so-called genetic cheat he has isn't anything special and is worthless . So many Chinese novels either they get a Supreme Grandpa or Heavenly Chaotic Technique and many of them are gems I don't see people complaining there
Another trash novel.
Mc only complains and call others hackers. The system also sucks. The story is nothing new and plot is also copy and paste. Don't recommend reading.
The main reason I do not continue to read this novel is simply because the author continually gives the mc breakthroughs saying he has reached the next realm in his techniques, then several chapters later he'll get to that same realm again after important moment, great struggle, or fortuitous encounter. Once or twice if corrected is understandable, we're human, no ones perfect. However, I read to chapter 32 and this occurred 6 times, uncorrected. That has killed my interest.
This quote literally turns into the worst one piece fanfic ever after about 70 chapters.
Like literally threw out the baby and the bathwater to move over to that trash.
It's a half-baked novel that doesn't make sense at all, not that you would expect too much realism from a web novel but this is just poor writing and isn't engaging at all.
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Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
Comp Eng Is Rad
And So Are You
Tahm Kench Is My Waifu
And He Loves To Eat Tofu
As Well As Chicken Soup
Because He Grew Up In Peru
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more.
The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses.
The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers.
The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system)
The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either.
Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving.