Good read so far, is it finished or ongoing author?
This sequel is even better then the 1st book!
I give this book 5 ...️...️...️...️...️
Do not read the new two chapters, I have mistakenly uploaded them.
Great book,highly recommended,light but different style
This is a very wonderful book
I enjoyed the twists and turns
so far seems like it can be a good book but updates are very slow coming
mehn this book is crazy,innit!!!!!!...... I recommend it to anyone who likes to have a good read that will keep you thrilled,in suspense and at the same time blow your mind and keep you wanting more. Thanks a lot Gabe,love you a whole lot .........
I'm hook, the plot are amazing and I love the character development. keep it up, you're going places author
the worst book ever, and the story is not complete. bad english. the story not so bad, if writen by someone who knows how to write in english.
Okay so let me just say - the plot structure in these first seven chapters is absolutely ruthless and I am HERE for it. We open with this dream sequence that's equal parts unsettling and magnetic, then BAM - we're immediately thrust into the crisis. Wen Xi's suicide attempt, the trending topics, the demand that Wen Yue take the blame. It's a cascade of pressure that just keeps building and building. What I love most is how the author plays with timing. The wedding is supposed to be tomorrow, but every single obstacle piles on: the video scandal, the postponed wedding, the family abandoning her, Gong Chen choosing to stay with Wen Xi. By the time Wen Yue is sitting alone in her apartment with that glass of red wine, the plot has systematically stripped away every safety net she had. And then she makes the decision to leave the wedding dress behind. That's the turning point - the moment the protagonist stops being a victim of circumstance and starts making her own moves. The dream with Gong Hengye keeps appearing like a thread pulling at the narrative. It's mysterious, it's charged, and it contrasts sharply with everything else. I'm genuinely curious where that subplot is heading. The pacing is relentless. There's no breathing room between crises, which makes it exhausting to read in the best way possible. I found myself wanting to skip ahead just to see what happens next, but also needing to sit with each devastating moment. That's good writing - making me feel both desperate to know and devastated to experience.
It's... quite disappointing. The concept is intriguing, but the execution leaves much to be desired. The main character's decisions often seem illogical, making him appear less intelligent than one would expect. This issue is a common pitfall in many Chinese novels, but this particular story exacerbates the problem. For instance, he recklessly confronts armed men to save some women, thereby earning the enmity of the most powerful group in the area.
Another significant flaw is the unrealistic portrayal of technology. Despite the widespread chaos and disasters, electricity and the internet inexplicably continue to function. The author explains that the world's downfall was triggered by the discovery of a spaceship on the moon, which they tampered with, leading to an apocalypse. However, this explanation feels contrived and poorly integrated into the narrative.
The intelligence of the characters in this novel is generally subpar, especially for supposed survivors. The limitations placed on the main character’s primary power do little to enhance the story. Early on, he acquires a werewolf zombie, but it dies due to his impulsive actions to save women. He then obtains a bearman zombie, which meets a similar fate.
This novel is a hard pass. Even if it weren’t a dual-world story, it might still struggle, but the dual-world aspect only compounds the issues without adding substantial value to the plot.