I quite enjoy the story so far, especially with the way the system is portrayed - it's not OP but it does work aas a plot armor, i mean read chapter 4 you get it...but the rest is good...i enjoy comparing the before and after stats change, it feels like the mc is growing...and the military radio call was done very good...does the author actually do radio calls? why is there no mech? i know there's like a power suit, but no mech yet? please include it would be interesting to see a mech fight...
It was a pleasant read! Honestly. I haven't finished reading but as far as I have read, it's really nice! I loved the MC and his personality. There are minor errors here and there but nothing that will ruin the reading experience. This novel has a really good worldbuilding. In short, I am really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work!
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So far, very good. Non-Linear Progression of Plot. Feels like an RPG with side quests in between. Very Nice pacing.
Also characters are very in touch, though I won't be able to get to a proper conclusion until I get to know their quirks better as the story progress. Excited to read more.
Honestly my only complaint is the length, I'm sad that I caught up so quickly. (though I did binge read all weekend) I cant wait to continue reading as more comes out
interesting characters and world background and good plot
question is this book a Yuri MC book like epic of caterpillar I know it has Yuri as a tag but the first two chapters is talking about meeting a handsome man LOL so I was just wondering if the main character is Yuri love interest love the book!!!
Got through 20 chapters and could no longer handle itAmazing premise, far too slow for my tastes. Example: it takes the first 150 chapters for in world time to pass. The female fenrir named maya is an insufferable character and forced romance makes it all the more worse. She is cruel to the mc, who up until chapter 20 is barely 36 hours old. She is lazy and incompetent as a guardian. skills and strength she has in spades, but only uses it to traumatize and nearly kill the mc. The story clearly states at one point that if one misstep was made during a “training (misspelled from purposeful torture)” session, he would have died.It’s genuinely sad to me that a character that is only 20 chapters old is the whole reason I have to drop the book. I’m well aware this sounds like a hate review but without that character I would have read every chapter and kept up with the book. Some characters just kill books.
This novel started out great, but the author purposefully sabotaged it with overused and frustratingly annoying cliches. I won’t say how exactly because I don’t like to spoil, but at around chapter 100, the author introduced a plot that essentially made all of the character development that came before it useless. That’s over 100 chapters of tedious character development that went down the drain. What a waste of time, unless you’re a masochist who likes being trolled
Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned
Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.
What the **** man how can you just add so much comedic undertone in a serious novel like this.
I mean I understand that you want stretch chapters but seriously I thought that it has lots of potential as I read the first couple of chapters then it came the idiotic undertone cliches