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I like it. It is truly interesting in the development, however I have to support the comment regarding the slow evolution. I really like system related stories of any kind and this one takes some time. I hope new updates are coming soon
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Is this the original author or did someone just copied it from Royal Road or scribblehub where author posted it till 110 chapters
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There’s a similar “sign-in” type novel called “sign-in buddha’s palm” where the protagonist is also very OP and it’s just him cruising through situations and I find, and this my personal opinion, that while this type of novel is one of the few that is, while not that interesting when read in succession, it’s pretty good read when it’s just a chapter or two a day because it’s just interesting enough to entertain you for a bit but just not enough to leave you sour with a cliffhanger and while this might be construed as an insult, I personally meant it as a compliment.
the story itself is pretty good with nice world building, and the pacing is nice as well. But the grammar is not the best, and the MC is really weak willed and can get frustrating at times. However the supporting characters Partner, and Alo make up for it. So overall I would say it is a good filler book to read if you are bored.
in my opinion the big paragraphs are one of the reasons it is annoying to read. they should have wrote smaller so it would pick interest of reader more easily
Honestly I'm loving this story. Professor Kal is a riot. I don't really mind the slow update schedule since you actually put a lot of effort to having good Grammer. I think I've see like one or two mistakes in the whole book so far. Really enjoying the story and can't wait for more
Yo, might as well review, which I rarely do.
Characters funnny and original. I love them all.
Story development good as well, not to fast, not to slow
Updates are good.
World building is amazing, it was clearly well thoughtout.
Would Recommend.
Hi! I can't write in english so i'm using google translator sorry if this gets confusing. I'm an avid reader of novels in general, a year ago I started and stopped at the last of your novel and I loved everything about it, the way you showed the world, how the story went with the protagonist's quests, I just want to say that this was all brilliant for me. I read another novel of yours and loved it too. You're the only author who makes me look up your name every month to see if any new chapters of my favorite novel come out
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