1st off, if you havent started reading this monstrosity yet, then when you do, skip the first few chapters, all the "suicide" ones are completely useless whining. second, i havent really read the novel, ive skimmed through the first 5 chapters, cause its all a giant wall of text, the vast majority of which is useless whining and *****ing. each chapter is like 10 chapters from other novels on the site.THAT IS NOT A GOOD THING. the author has no idea how to space things out to make it more fun, and easier, for the readers to handle, if you actually enjoy reading giant fucking walls of text like this, then go to your nearest hotel, the bible will do the same thing. this is completely disgusting. i don't know how it goes after he does whatever the **** happnes after he kills himself. because it takes 4 FUCKING CHAPTERS to kill himself, each of those 4 are literally 8 or 9 PARAGRAPHs of *****ing and whining about how he wants to die. this is retarded.
The english is terrible. As a native english speaker I can say that with the utmost confidence. It's strange though. There are no spelling mistakes, but the actual sentences are mashed together like bundles of words out of order.
So unless you have some skill when it comes to interpretation and the time to read some things several times, don't read this novel.
Have a great world building and amazing characters.
I just started this book out of boredom but man this did gave a shock with a very good plot.
Till chapter 260 the book has been great and would love to read more.
some words to the author
1- if you can then please increase the updates, make them atleast 4-5 per week cause.
2- An advice to not make the harem too big it will really ruin the story as this book have a very high potential.
Would love to read more of this book.
Each one with their tastes, but if you want readers then the reverse harem was a very bad idea.
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Writing is neat and good choices of words that could easily understand by the readers. The narration took a bit serious in the beginning but the author made sure to explain his/her ideas about the plotline, it is quite descriptive in fact, though long sentences sometimes bores the eyes, the story piques interest! A good read, keep up the work dear author!
Review as of Chp 12.
Overall, this story is refreshing and very enjoyable. I've read quite a few VRMMOs and I've seen none like this one.
Give it a try and I promise you wont regret it.
I haven't read many novels yet but I like the unique concept of the novel and I think it has a lot of potential if anyone is reading this novel I know the first few chapters may seem like they are not that good but after a few chapters, it gets really good so give it a read.
This is a really interesting and beautiful story. It's certainly inspired by "I'm Really Not the Evil God's Lackey", but goes very differently about it.
The setting of a bookstore and learning magic while living a comfortable life in it has just made me fall in love with the book, and i can't wait to see where it goes.
I recommend it to everyone that enjoys fantasy, magic and i'm certain quite a bit of Mystery.
My only fear is if this turns into a harem story, so far there haven't been many signs of it, but it's always scary that a harem will come and ruin every book i read.
Looks good from what I am seeing! I big time recommend this one as it's interesting for sure. I think a little confusing at first, but it seems to finally be hitting the main storyline.
Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:
In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.
I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.
Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.
Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.
This is the end of my honest review.
Interesting not overused content worth read
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Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do, so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
You'll never know if you don't go
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
But the meteor men beg to differ
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
My world's on fire, how about yours?
That's the way I like it and I never get bored
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
All that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?
I need to get myself away from this place
I said yep what a concept
I could use a little fuel myself
And we could all use a little change
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do, so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
You'll never know if you don't go (go!)
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold