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This is a very good novel i hope the author doesnt drop it.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
translation is trash, I dropped this after reading the first chapter, then I read this novel on another online platform and it was better than this one, although not very good but I can understand it better!!
It caught my attention I hope they release this novel and put it to vote for it, I am already tired of novels about systems, it is about time that we have novels with Mc workers
Invested too much not to finish it but a difficult read towards the end.
This story was a big disappointment. In the first projection he faces against its stated that when he kicked the thigh of the projection it was in extreme pain but it didnt affect its mobility, then it says the projection was limping??? And then it says that the projection doesnt feel pain. this plothole literally made me drop this story so fast. the sentences were at a max of 6 sentences apart so i dont know how the author managed to contradict themself like that.
Translation is fine (if applicable), did a 1 star update stability since this is a trial read and most end at chapter 40. Story development I rated 2 stars because there is a lot of repetition through out the chapters, not to mention inconsistencies with numbers. Character design I rated 3 stars as it’s a generic character. World background I rated 5 stars since it give you all the information needed about the world as the story develops.
I know there are 3 or 4 novels here with similar plot but this one is the best. I don't care if it's original or a copy. The writing quality is just great. Please, pick it up. There is no need to waste time on translating sign-up novels that are already translated, like Buddha Palm
It’s super good. I specificaly like their enemies and the world background. The author has a way with words that makes me so excited. I’ve been recommended this and it already has 40+ updates! Keep up the good work!
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I love the way the author describe the action scenes. It make the story feel more engaging and lifelike. If there’s one thing that I’m not too happy about would be the unclear update schedule for the novel. Which honestly makes no sense as the raws are pushing 700.
Love it. pace is the only red light indicator. this novel is ambitious project, and i hope the author has the stamina to do it justice in reaching a satisfying conclusion .
Simple...1. Go to Another World...2. Build an Internet Cafe3. New customers sometimes underestimate MC shop4. Customers amaze with the game.5. Customers amaze with MC gaming skills.6. Release new games, food, movies gradually.7. Customers shock when trying the new food9. Major event9. Crowd amaze with MC skill-mastery from the game etc0. Go to other region to open new branch Internet CafeBack to number 2I read till c.430 and that was really what happen in this novel, I'm sorry to say this but GOAW has better plot than this... umm, its about internet cafe, so it can't be help (maybe)...Well it depends on the reader themself, me personally fine with this novel but sometimes its gets boring...
