It is a very well-detailed novel. The characters feel real. The details of the setting in the novel are what one would expect from a future where space travel is normal. The history is very good. I really recommend this book.
I didn't even read this but i come here to ask how adopting a super pet make you into a asura... Spoiler is also welcomed i just wan to know how will his development start and if it will be connected to his pet.
read-only Chapter 5 and that Chapter will review this book, and you will understand why it has 1 star. good luck and have a good day , see you on another review
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Very quick paced, draws you in with action. Sometimes the sentences are a little long, so make sure to take your time reading them. The characters are realistic and intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
Though, not a fan of idols type of novels, I took my time to read the available chapters of your work. Firstly, the quality of your writing. I think your writing is good. Good grammar, tenses and phrases. Only minor errors which I've pointed out in the comments.Secondly, the rate of updates. This is excellent so far. Thirdly, the nature of your characters. I believe you understand the logic behind character formation and development. Your MC is of great character, even the side characters are all good. Well eritten characters.Fourthly, story line. Right from chapter one, your story is progressing well. From the MC in a new environment to the beginning of his role in his new environment. Steady and focus storyline.And lastly, the world building. Though, I'm not a fan of this world, it's well written. The little of the world I've read is a proof of that.Keep up the good work.
Very interestkng premise, and good execution. The main character is interesting and charasmatic, and he makes this a very fun read. Overall, the story is reall good.Keep up the good work.
This novel started so well. It was easy and relaxed, then it got scary in chapter 2. I love the chapter when the meteor falls. I feel like I'm in the story. It felt so real. So thumbs for your writing! ?❤️????
Alright, so this story is getting better by the day. After the initial issues, inconsistencies in the story (that had been later fixed by the new translator) it is just getting more and more interesting. The magic concepts are not entirely new (which is good because it helps us to relate to it easier) but the application of it is fresh and exciting. It is finally showing the promise for a similar story to WMW and after a hundred chapter or so it is delivering on this promise. So, my advice is don't drop the story until you get to about a hundred or so chapter because it keeps getting more mysterious and exciting. Many thanks for the hard work of translating the story, please keep up the good work.
I really like the story, It has great development and the MC learns every mistake he has made. But why does it stop updating now? It's such a great light novel. I hope the author can continue updating it. I'm now on chapter 46.
There are only a few chapters, but from them, I can tell you that the writing quality is good, the story is quite interesting, I look forward to reading more, the five-star is well deserved, good job!
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