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A wonderful story. Can the update increase please?
like the story but way to hard to read it poorly translated
A great story , realy well written and so funny ( if you think zombies and blood and gore are funny ?)Sadly the last book is deleated from the author, the story online goes only till chapter ~94 the rest of the chapters are empty. But the story has a closure even if not all questions are answerd.
From my perspective, this story reflects real life. There are some people like Lyan Oo who was ready to sacrifice anything for their beloved person. And there're people like Maw Oo who excels in everything they do and fails at love subject. It depicts people are never impeccable and being a person with flaws is perfect. Along with the story, I feel complicated and heartbroken. I'm anticipating the ending of the story.
I read until the first 15 chapters cause i couldn‘t handle it anymore. The writing is all over the place. Much happens but you can only really understand some parts cause the situations aren‘t really well explained. New progress to the story isn‘t slowly introduced but as a reader you just get thrown into it.
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In my opinion the idea of the story is great and has a very good potential. The only part thats bugs me is the writing style or the absence of any good structure in the chapters. The chapters only have a really rough structure like Beginning -> Action -> End of situation.
Adding introductions or background information for new appearing characters or any real introduction for the story would probably be a good idea. There are almost no descriptions so the Tempo of the story is far to fast to get into it. And if there are descriptions they are all over the place and not really good integrated.
As a reader I get the feeling that the beginning of the story is just written down without further thinking to get it to a point where the real plot should start.
So I‘m dropping it since if I can‘t get into the beginning of the story there won‘t be a chance for the rest of the story.
Well so far I'm a chapter 15 I couldn't read anymore the story feels like it came out of someone with either amnesia or has Alzheimer and I mean literally it's like a novelty for me this author is in a category of his own which I have just discovered let me explain: the lack of details which you will see a lot lacking literally, the inconsistencies, the explanations that come chapters after where they are supposed to be I think this is where the Alzheimer part comes in, the stupidity more than normal, the lack of explanation in every part of the MC'S life, and the concept of the story is however the author likes it to be for example if you want to write some s*** beside a reasonable paragraph he does it with no explanation probably because that's how his brain works I don't know how people keep reading this s*** maybe for passing time or whatever but for me my brain can't take it each time I think the author will change I stand disappointed whoever is enjoying the story is either never read a good story or their brain work the same as the author these are the only two reasonable explanations I can find to anyone who says otherwise you're either one or the other of these categories or a new category I don't know (try imagining somebody having to choose between you and a degenerate to give their powers to and what he does is giving super powers to the degenerate instead of you now tell me how the f*** you'll feel that is exactly how I'm feeling when I made this review) the concept has potential however the author screws it up and this is a special one as I said he's in a league of his own first time seeing this kind of screw up I mean I seen others but this is in a league of its own my advice don't read it this is just an advice go with your own risk
The novel is by far interesting but I can say much about it as it is still new and few chapters and yeah also sometimes it's confusing who is speaking. *Give me more*
The Translation is great, the story is SH*T;
Great start, but keeps tormenting the MC FOR NO F*CKING REASON!
Just extra characters so that I can post this Review, if it wasn't for the translation quality, and stability of updates, I would give this novel a 1 star!
This novel seems a face slapping novel with a few killings if needed. The mc tries to act as elegant and cool as much as possible, leaving those who have tried to kill him alone while trying to act cool slapping their faces and only will he try to kill someone if the plot requires it. Although the mc is ruthless and dominating, unfortunately, he's literally the type of a carefree old monster who doesn't end all troubles immediately but instead will let the troubles come to him. He wasn't the typical ruthless mc like from 'The Man in Hell' which would start a massacre. So, his ruthlessness is okay but not enough to be called brutal to cruelty like the mc in 'The Man in Hell'.
Overall, the novel is good especially if there's smut in this in the future.
What I only don't like is that there's absolutely little to none killings in 60 chapters. What died is just a random character like servants which is truly ridiculous in the 60 chapters.
So I believe this novel will have thousands of chapters due to how slow the story is.
At chapter 5, dropped, 3.8 stars from me.
Although I can't say anything, I already read enough and this types of novels isn't enough to interest me.
So for people, this novel is extremely similar to [ I am a superstar ] The world entertainment industry is extremely lacking behind, thus mc uses his knowledge to create LOL for example or popular novels such as [ Library of heaven's path ]
Though with a luck cube of some sort.
This must be enough info for y'all to not hate on for posting a review for only reading 5 chapters
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