Good book, I wish it continued, but these Types of books don’t do well when it comes to voting. But, I like the story and characters. exp exp
Hey webnovel if possible we can use more non eastern fantasy, gaming beast taming novels and more decent gems plz. Maybe more fantasy, magical realism, or horror if possible.
Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potential
There's a lot to improve author
The grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read it
Story development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novels
Character design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man.
World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area.
My review can change in future.
Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author.
I hope you improve in the future.
The progress is too slow....
Feels like it will take 300 chapters just for world devlipment.
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only a copy from legendary mechanic.
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I need more please
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I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it.
Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.
Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.
Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire
The story is quite enticing and the concept is superb as well. The author has a good grasp of the English language and clearly has a strong grammatical power. As the author continues to progress I can tell that this novel will become a hit my only complain is the paragraphing issue but that will be solved in a jiffy. Give the book a read its quite interesting.
It’s a good story but the Mc is 37 and he feels attracted to a 6 year old even though he died and went to a new world as a child he is still a perv because he is still 37 years old even if he’s in a body of a child
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