Decent start. Well written for the most part, but increasingly dull and repetitive for every arc. The plot is non existant, only Han Li's cultivation journey. Also every arc there's some beauties that take and interest in him that he totally ignores because "he's focused on the cultivation path", blatant teasing that goes nowhere in other words. That could've been enough but he has no personality and no principles and nothing he'd fight for, other than the illusive goal of Immortality and preserving his life on the way so we have no reason to care about him. I can only imagine this having such a high rating based on when it came out and that it's competition was mostly really ****ty novels... This is, like someone before me said, like water, totally fine but bland as hell.
An interesting concept with a bit of a twist. A demon starting at the bottom of the food chain. Well, if that isn't worth reading, then I don't know what is! Give it a try :)
Mage....Seems like western fantasy..I'm voting................Now need to add 140 character ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ok.
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it's a very nice book .
the chapters are well written.
Keep up author
IT BEEN FOREVER SENSE U PUT ANY CHAPTERS OUT!! R U GOING TO COME BACK OR NOT?? IF NOT CAN U JUST TAKE UR BOOK DONE PLEASE BECAUSE I REALLY DONT WANT MY HOPES TO BE SO HIGH ALL THE TIME WAITING FOR U!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO SEE IT CONTINUE BUT OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING IS GOING ON AND IF UR NOT GOING TO KEEP IT GOING THEN JUST GET RID OF IT PLEASE!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT IT TO KEEP GOING!!!
I must say that I love his story and writing style, the big problem with the story is that he never updates, I keep telling him to write more, but none so far.
Went will you release more chapter. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!!
Chapter 10 currently. It seams that the author has rewriten older chapters and latest is done 3 days ago. If it had more chapters and faster publishing I would recomend it fully. As of now I will still say that start of this book is very interesting and as it seems that its not droped you could put it into your libary.
The game world here is quit original I hope there will be lot of chapters coming soon.
overall great story can't wait for update
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B.D.H.K ANIMATED GROUP IS DISCONTINUE THIS NOVEL ITS OUR FIRST NOVEL WE HAVE DONE LOT OF MISTAKE AND continuous delay in chapter publishing we are sincerely sorry for that because of this we cannot achieve our view our margin in time. We will again come back in near future who is the whole new Novel King we are taking leave with the new background with a new story for now we have to discontinue the story.
thank you for all of you stay safe stay healthy.
you can visit our new noble( the Emperors betrayed son) we will publish episode everyday on that Novel
we have learn from our mistake trying to be better.
again thank you King ambitions will come back one day.