Intriguing
I'm so inlove with this book. I can't get the toothpaste icecream and the durian on my head. So funny. OMG. More of thos please
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Okay, let me start by explaining how I found the translation before I dive into the story itself. The translation was readable, which is definitely a step up from machine translations, but it still had its fair share of issues. Names were often misspelled, and if I hadn’t read a lot of Korean novels before, many cultural nuances and details would have been lost on me.
Now, onto the story itself... I think it’s decent for a casual read.
However, I have to say that the author seems quite inexperienced. Even as a hobby writer, I noticed a lot of rookie mistakes while reading. For instance, the author often spends too much time on unimportant details that are never mentioned again, just to emphasize how great the main character (MC) is.
Here are a couple of examples:
1. When the MC was a baby, there was a video of him eating and drinking baby food, which made other babies around his age, who were refusing to eat, become "hypnotized" to eat. This became a big deal, and a viewer even made a poll asking which age groups of babies were affected, up to about 20 months old. But this detail was completely useless. The poll discussion took up several paragraphs, which felt unnecessary.
2. Another memorable example is when the MC appeared in a famous movie for the first time. He used an ability to evoke pity because something very tragic happened to him. This made a lot of people leave the cinema in tears, and the movie gained more traction than expected. However, instead of focusing on the emotional impact, the author spent nearly a whole chapter discussing a YouTuber who analyzed the statistics of how many people cried during the film. Apparently, it was between 0-10%, and this detail was mentioned multiple times. There was also a challenge created because of this, either "how many times can you watch the movie without crying" or "how many films does it take you to stop crying." The translation made this part confusing, but it was excessively mentioned.
These kinds of irrelevant details are recurrent throughout the novel. On the other hand, important parts are often glossed over, mentioned in passing with very little clarification. This is a common mistake among inexperienced writers.
Now, for my personal opinion about the plot. Honestly, I knew what I was getting into, but I was still somewhat disappointed. I really didn’t like how the MC seems to put no effort into anything and just relies on his abilities. This wouldn’t be so bad if there were at least some psychological or emotional issues explored, but there’s nothing. It’s literally boring. While I understand that slice-of-life stories aren’t about action or drama, even the most mediocre ones have more suspense than this. Everything is so predictable that I can’t bring myself to continue reading. However, if you enjoy this type of story, it might not be a bad read. It just wasn’t my cup of tea.
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Firstly, the main character (MC) in this story possesses a similar skillset to the protagonist from "The Reincarnated Villain Makes the Heroines Beg for Forgiveness." Initially, the MC boasts about their writing abilities, believing they are proficient due to extensive reading and claiming that swapping a hero's role for a villain's is effortless. However, their arrogance is misplaced, as their fictional narratives are poorly thought-out and filled with nonsense. It's baffling how the heroines could possibly buy into such ridiculous plots.
In one particular story segment, after a fight, the original MC and the heroine's long-time companion reveal sinister plans, causing the heroine to suddenly accept them without addressing the numerous inconsistencies. I couldn't continue reading beyond that point. If you're seeking a story similar to "The Reincarnated Villain," I'd advise that this one falls short in terms of quality, based on my perspective.
The experience was highly enjoyable. Despite the significant misunderstandings between the main characters, their love for each other stands out. The supporting characters add depth to the story. My only minor issue is that the chapters are divided into two parts, which can be slightly inconvenient when reading. However, considering the frequent updates, it's still manageable. I'd definitely recommend giving it a try!
This is just the fifth chapter, and I must confess, I'm already completely engrossed. Our female lead is intelligent, witty, stunning, and humorous. The male lead may be straightforward, but he's adorable too. I appreciate that she didn't reincarnate, but was transported, which adds a unique touch. What satisfies me is her genuine reason, not contrived excuses like in other stories, for approaching him. That particular scene was priceless. Overall, reading this novel is a delightful experience. It's intriguing, entertaining, and holds a special place in my heart. A huge thank you to the translation team for sharing this fantastic novel with us. Can't wait for more updates!
Just 4 stars. The story is quite simple. It started out cute but eventually turned silly, especially in how the female lead (FL) managed her business, which seemed unrealistic at times.
Honestly, it would have been better without the romance and if the story had focused solely on how the FL would make her store successful.
I liked the beginning of the series because it showed real struggle and starting from almost nothing. However, once everything became too easy and the FL received everything she needed without much effort, it became boring.
There was no depth to the characters. One of the most disappointing aspects was how the FL, who used to be a poor orphan and found happiness in being helped by others, ended up opening a store primarily catering to wealthy customers, which felt contradictory to her initial values.
I have completed the WN version up until its raw source, as per the information provided, and I've only read the initial chapter of this light novel translation. However, based on the reviews, it's evident that the translation lacks cohesion, with places and events being confusing and difficult to follow. The transition from the S-beauties discussion to Sara's encounter with the main character in just the first chapter left me utterly disoriented.
There are instances where pronouns shift abruptly within a single sentence, from male to female and back, without clear context, often just a few words apart. I sincerely hope that a more accurate translation will be available soon, so readers can easily comprehend the first volume, especially the one scheduled for release in December. From what I gather, this story seems significantly different from the web novel, focusing more on the first girl and providing greater detail. I am eager to explore all the events surrounding her story.
That honestly sounds amazing. It's rare to find a good story where the protagonist is essentially unmoored from time and watching it pass by.
This novel is d*mn good any very funny
That will remain a mystery till the end of time for us
"I would rate it 4 stars. The book is overall well-constructed and without significant issues. However, I had difficulty forming an emotional connection with the characters, which made it feel more distant as I read."