NitrogenousBeingcU
Trash revenge novel mc always has some humanity left despite being a demon, its like author projecting his insecurities to the mc.
As a courtesy I'm just going to post 3 stars since I haven't actually read the story.
I'm just here to ask why do you use a summary that reads like something from fanfiction.net?
Your summary provides conflicting ideas and vastly untenable scope of dramatism. It would've been better to emphasise how special she could be while implying mysteriously that there's a reason to her state of affairs, alluding to a fight of galactic proportions.
Well, that's just how I would do it anyways.
Review as at chapter 20
It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.
I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out.
But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.
Wow best book I have read in a while! Keep up the good work.
Epic stuff, you can really feel the escalating tension as sh** hits the fan.
Worth a try. Interesting main character, compelling side characters and an involved plot.
Try translating War of Spies if you want to find the raw.
I want to give full score, but the translation from around 2280 just doesn't make sense most at someplaces. Almost like google translated.
loved this, so sad the author dropped this book
Reminds me of Reborn as Batman's little Brother.
Fantastic work the Author . The world building is great and characters has consistent I genuinely enjoy the story .Keep up the good work.
Shameless ReviewPlease enjoy the storyBye
this novel is actually very good is start slow and steady i hope it will be continued and not get stop. please give more chapters on it thank you
I would definitely say this novel is a gem. Honestly the world building is really good. And the way the novel describe the world building is not too lenghty yet the information dump is good enough for the readers to understand and imagine the way the world works.
Honestly the thing that hooked me is definitely the huge potential in how the world building works and the good and fluid writing style. The only thing that is 'okay' for the moment is the lack of interesting characters. But honestly im okay with basic characters if the world and plot itself is interesting. I would rather have basic characters than really stupid and dumb character from most of the webnovels i read which annoys the shit out of me. Anyway thats all, give it a try if you are reading this to get a feel of someone who have read till chapter 57 at the point of writing this. I can say the novel is top quality for now. (Fingers crossed it will keep that same quality)
