This was the first novel I read, it’s okay but it doesn’t have a lot of chapters atm, so I hope this novel turns out to be good.
MC is sword...Btw a unique concept..This is the first strange thing but I love it. The journey of MC and the background you made are really captivating. Hope MC would continue his journey. The sword . ah MC is really powerful..Hope he would reach his destination soon...btw keep updating author. Your work is quite alluring ...
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Trash story I don't like the story after Ch 56
Trash story I don't like the story after Ch 56
Trash story I don't like the story after Ch 56
Trash story I don't like the story after Ch 56
Trash story I don't like the story after Ch 56
Can't help but rate it poorly
MC reincarnated as a reincarnator.
Like others of this species, they reincarnate in groups to attain strength and wealth over lives.
They have a reincarnator world which they stay in inbetween reincarnations.
MC is an isekaitard. He admits to simply seeing this second life of his as a game. First thing he does is screw around with a young master, they had some problems before mc popped in but whatever. What gets me annoyed is that MC gained power 100x more than this young master and for like 5 chapters of wasting time and just doing nothing when he's supposed to kill him.
The entire few chapters is people reacting to him wanting to kill this young master who hasn't even showed up yet.
MC with his skills could just hurry up and kill them all in a few seconds and ignore everything else, but he drags it all around, for what word count?
MC can insta-op himself with his system which makes it feel like fanfic.
Nothing much so far.
Friend I read your novel and the truth has a future, it would be great if you could create a group of girls like @danbilzerian, on a separate topic visit your patreon with the intention of sponsoring, but I saw that you have no advance chapter and being honest 10 dollars as the only subscription It is somewhat expensive, but in general the novel is good, keep it up;)
(It would be great for your protagonist to create her own brand, and dress her girls with it as the man named above)
I had hoped for more, I like city/kingdom building novels in general and it is my favorite genre to read.
I have read the first 10 chapters, it is kind of... bland... it just doesnt catch my attention. I might force myself to read the free chapters, and I rly hope it gets better.
My biggest disappointment is the fact that his trip to the real world was not described. He just goes and comes back with a bunch of stuff... no talk about how he acquired them or anything.
I mean let's be real... how will you get shotguns in China? it's not like he whipped them out of his arse.
Same with swords and bows & arrows.
No talk about how he acquired anything really... I would have really liked to see his trip as he meets the people that he does and sells them some stuff. (trip as in before he cured the kid and got scammed)
When he came to the city.
He didn't personally do much... or it was not described.
He would just hand the papers to someone else to handle... I get that it is realistic since I would delegate work like that too if I was in the same situation... but at least tell us the path of him researching how to make a proper water wheel or something. Like a paragraph or two was enough.
The chapters are short and there are some inconsistencies when it comes to either translation or maybe the author just doesnt know what he is writing.
I will probably read the free chapters and update my review based on that... but for now I have read 25% of what I can read and I'm not impressed. Especially if I have to pay or use free-passes to read the rest.
excellent story
I love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.
good perssonage construction
update more remember please because I love this kind of novel
the story is good and well edited, It was flowing smoothly and fun to read. it's characters have a well defined nature, smooth pacing and easy to understand.
A really good novel for those who want a system type in fantasy/magic world. Great read till now. Good progression and pretty interesting as novels go.
I didn't think i would find something like this accidentally!
I'm really glad i came across this novel, It has a strong potential to rise and be one of the highest rated ones on Webnovel.
Keep it up, seriously!
And thank you for providing us with a piece of novel to entertain us ♥