this makes absolutely no sense.
Oh ok thanks
Will the author still continue this book? It's really good though. It's been awhile since a story fascinated me so much.
I love the story of the book and bl hints but I wish it was faster paced and the writer would update it soon I also think that they could have made the background history fit in a bit more gently into the story but overall LOVING THIS BOOK
Overall, it wants to be good and I applaud this for trying something different. It feels like someone watched the original Blade Runner and then added some Ghost in the Shell to it.
The Good: I like a dark, gritty, science fiction setting such as this. This is not a child's novel, but it is still a familar power-building scifi novel. We have some excellent character descriptions in most cases and the world itself appears interesting.
The Bad: The writing quality and word choices in some of the earlier chapters is awful. A simple grammar check would've gotten most of them. (For example: Using bombarded as a noun when it should've been bombardment in multiple cases.) It's trying to be dark and gritty at times and pulls this off well, but sometimes it is taken too far and just gets weird for me. This is purely subjective so I can't really bash it for that. The 18+ scene was... alright. It needs something more or maybe more build-up. Maybe I'm just getting old so it could work for others.
The Neutral: Not much to say. The author appears to have experience setting up a good story, but the grammar just needs a bit of help. The story seemed to escalate very quickly up to chapter 9 so I am not sure if this will be a long story or not. Keep it up, though! I'm enjoying it!
nice and interesting one I'll be reviewing it
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The book is really well written, and I keep on guessing what happens. The only flaw would be how long I have to wait for updates. Other than that, it has really good detail, and is extremely enjoyable to read. It also has many unexpected turns throughout the book, and that is what makes it a great book.
Cap 680. The relationship between the mc and the fmc continues without showing progress (it gets worse again). I already understand the reason why this novel has so many chapters, the constant push and pull of the relationship with the fmc is somewhat predictable at all times. They reconcile one chapter and the next everything restarts and so on over and over again ad nauseam. Worst of all, the author does it on purpose. Every time mc and fmc reconcile, the author can't wait to find a way to separate them again. The author is very restless... almost as if he has an obsessive compulsive desire to harm the main relationship.
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love this book! perfectly written, chapters consistently updated, and just enough suspense to keep you thinking about it until the next update. loving this author and can't wait to see where the story goes. thank you for all your time and effort <3
Another amazing book by Author Bryant. You can not help but to fell in love with Cassidy and Colin story. I have laughed, cryed and cheered though out the whole book and hated to see it end.