Martin_Donhy
Good novel!! only my greed still unsatisfied so please MOAR!! hahahaha! ??????????????????????????????????????????????
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The story was still okay till 150 chapters. 6/10 till then. but after that, the story becomes more and more ridiculous. mc becoming too strong within days, and ome shotting enemies many levels higher, even in high level cultivation bases. these things spoil the story later.
Love this novel. I am loving the whole snorting powder to evolve using pollen thing, really an ingenious method to grow stronger through the abuse of drugs. Wish it was more popular to have more chapters but alas it is not meant to be. This novel has a special place in my heart. To the left of the renal artery.
bro what the heck. the translation is clearly MTL. not even edit before uploading the chapter. the story is boring too. sigh, wasting my time reading this novel...
yuck ,so effin generic , trash novel , don't read this , spare ur selves . ,, wtf is this shit . I've saved ur eyes , thank me later ......
can someone explain the first chapter with some sort of referenceby that I mean what is it he is seeingIs this a Pokémon fan fictionI stopped at chapter 1 due to it not being clear to myself wtf is going on with his vision
This novel is not bad for now and i quite enjoying reading it and i think this will be well-known in the future. I recommended to all new in this Qidian that just try read this novel.
Incredible. A breath of fresh air in the original section of webnovel. If you are looking for something nuanced, well written, unfettered with the weak writer's crutch of deus ex machina, I strongly recommend you give this a read.
good read enough said. while the sense of time is all over the place but the sense reality is pretty good. with no excessive nationalist, where at some point he even leave China sports altogether
The quality of this novel is much better than most in Qidian, The writer's writing skill is pretty good, and he's very clear in what direction he wants to take his story forward. The writing is void of *******ism, which is rare to find in Qidian. The writer's command of english is very good. However, I felt his understanding of Japanese culture isn't sufficient enough. The biggest problem to the storytelling is the attempt to blend and use old Japanese, modern Japanese, and modern english words and terms to tell the story. Very frustrating for me to see other characters keep calling the mc Miura-kun, as if he's a high school boy in shounen novel. Also, his sister (Very shounen sister, she has all the traits) calling him nii-san and nii-chan instead of Aniue or Onii-sama/san (It actually should be Tadakata-Onii-sama/san, because she has another older brother, especially when all three of them are presented). These details are important, at least I deem them to be when the Author expects us to learn the archaic Japanese words for 'spearman' and 'archer'. If you want to be that authentic, you need to walk the whole nine yards, not using english pound for draw weight, and definitely not having these Japanese characters talk like modern people. This breaks the story for me, more than anything else.I'm very critical when I comment, especially when I recognize that the Author is competent. Mark twain once said "The difference between the right word and the almost right word is really a large matter – it is the difference between the lightning and the lightning bug.
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