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Exactly what I'm searching for. The main character's determination is nice, not stopping to get his family members. And as long as you continue, this gonna be good.
Bring some tissue if you'll read this novel, you'll probably need it."Love is in the air, you cant touch but you can feel it, and you know it exist."well, bla bla bla.Please support this novel.:)
DROP IT THIS INSTANT!!!Absolute trash, whatever little value this unique concept had lost in converting into western version. Greatly disappointed.
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good novel worth readinghas potential...................................................................................needed more words
first of all i know my english is pretty bad but deal with itlets split the review in two parts. the firstpart are chap1-48if you like storys with are like written **** with cultivation to make it look better then this is your story atlest its one of the better ones of its kindafter chapter 48 the story makes the mother of all nosedives everything exept the humor dies painfull i will put in some exampellsbut there are stong spoilers SPOILER DOWN BELOWexploding dickserosuu tipexplosion oh i allmost forgot he ****t his grandma she is 120if all of shis dont bother you then this is the perfect story for you
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Author please pick up the peak novel up again this is so good i don't know how more people haven't read this author please pick this novel again and if possible to make it free like it is know if its not possible you can make it with coins
I was enjoying this story—a little. EE…It seems like IF one entered a sect to cultivate, that a cheat that made cultivation irrelevant would take away all the satisfaction—most of the satisfaction—out of attaining higher realms. Still. the tongue-in-cheek way the author handled the story made it halfway amusing. Then the act that ruins so many of these cultivation stories occurred. The protagonist ordered the little girl under his tutelage, to cripple someone's cultivation. I have no problem with murder—even torture, under the right motivation—But in a cultivation world, as described, absolutely NOTHING would justify crippling someone. There is an old proverb: "How do you hurt someone who has lost everything? Answer: Give him back something dear to him—BROKEN." IF one had been a cultivator, normal life would be hopelessly broken. Every second of every day would be like walking with shards of glass in one's shoes. You know, JUST ONCE I'd like to read about someone promptly committing Seppuku upon having their cultivation crippled. Ah well, I rant.
Honest Rating 4.At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written.I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form.Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author.I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters.Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest pointsAlso grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes.With that being said I think this