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I like the plot of story and lots of the characters and some parts were kind of sad for me but overall I like it and I think whoever made this should keep it up
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Ate o 40 esta tudo bem vamos ver depois tomara que o autor nao cague a obra e por favor cade a raw o bruto o chines direto o mtl ou qualquer coisa
This story is amazing so far but new chapters come out too slow to keep the interest of some of those who get to the newest chapters and are waiting for new ones to come out. While I understand that is important to take your time writing to make sure that new chapters are of good quality, the fast release of new chapters is also really important even if you have to shorten the chapter to achieve this. More but smaller chapters of the same quality will help you keep the attention of those readers that are less patient or invested in the story because they will notice a notification for a new chapter more often and keep it at the top of their library each time they open it to read the new chapter. It may also help you Increase your writing quality because you will be focusing on a smaller amount of work at a time.
A pretty solid book in my opinion. Its a mish mash of things, but its written in an organized manner. Good read overall. Shame that if it gets popular here... you already know what would happen.
The nationalism in this novel is extremely irritating, every chapter the author has to praise his country once or twiceThe nationalism in this novel is extremely irritating, every chapter the author has to praise his country once or twice
Another braindead system cultivation novel. Another braindead system cultivation novel. Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.Another braindead system cultivation novel.
The story is pretty good so far, I've only read 40 chapters at the time of this review. The mc acts as he was portrayed to be in the introduction so there are no problems there. The world background and grammar usage are pretty solid as well, nothing crazy but it is good. My main gripe with this novel is the way the author handles time skips. Time skips are a staple of the cultivation genre so its pretty much expected that there will be some, the problem though is that when time skips happen in this story it feels like time only moved forward for the mc. Ex: Mc does something that would create trouble for the country he was in and flees to another country. While in country number 2 there is a time skip of several years after which mc returns to country 1. None of the consequences of the mcs actions at country 1 have played out during the time skip, but after mcs return the consequences suddenly start playing out. Personally I think the author needs to look at how he handled these time skips and correct his handling of them at least with whatever time skips come later. If possible I would suggest he goes back and edits the early chapters and make a couple changes to the story so it doesn't seem like things only happen when the mc is around. I'm not saying that he can't only focus on the mcs perspective because there isn't anything wrong with that, just that things should be able to progress even when he isn't physically present.
This book is fast paste in terms of development. MC goes from weak to strong. The woeld development can be a bit confusing at times. Overall it is not a bad book but it could have been better.
I really like this novel but today whenever I try to click in to read a chapter I'm unable to get to it this is the second novel on webnovel.com that I've had this issue.