My first rating of probably many to come. This Novels' humor is a blast!Although, immature at times, language wise, the story is extremly well written, and I have not found any errors yet.Characters are nicely done and don't feel over the top.I am expecting great things!
your novel is pretty good, it has a good start and a good character design, the only problem is that there is less details for the world background and story development. but overall its good! thats all!
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Wonderful writing. I enjoying this! Near the end my heart almost drop when I read what happen to Wataru and Shinji. I am not ready for tragedy! But I am so glad that they both are all right. But I am still sad about what happen to Yuina though. Also, is there any sequel? I mean with that last line at the last chapter... I don't believe that the headmaster have nothing to do with everything that happen...Anyway, here is 5* from me.
It could have been a great story but the author changes the mc to make it drag on longer, also simply. So the was the girl he could not implant the seed of the mind he did not her the first time, I understand why he did not kill her that time. But the next time is straight up simping if you can't control it, he should kill and take the power, instead of manipulating remotely simping. The are other problems what about all the demon powers and spells, they are only skills and weapons and tiles. You might erase what makes demons supreme. then the is the mentality of paying people back.So in total lots of potential if done correctly, but wasn't simping galore and erasing what makes a demon a demon.
It's a very good novel!The system is heavily inspired by the gamer but the story is completely different!I can safely tell you that the story is not plagiarism by the gamer. Both are stories of the same genre not plagiarism here (although the name "The Roleplayer" is very suspicious kkkk)
I personally enjoy this book as it takes a new spin on the topic of reincarnation, Murim and power fight books. It has puzzling mysteries and lore hidden deeply within every chapter. I would recommend this to anyone who loves Murim novels or Manhwa's
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It's a normal modern cultivation setting. Schools focus on cultivation and students work hard to cultivate to higher levels to get into good colleges. It's a meh, only thing I don't like is the cultivation progress of the mc. I must admit, I may have been spoilt by the many trial reads of fast paced cultivation. But dude, this guy was level 5 qi refinement at ch 1 and 20 chapters later he's still at the same level. Overall the story is uninteresting and I practically skimmed the whole 20 chapters and only saw that there were not that much of a change in mc's progress. At most he focused on learning talisman and improving his spirit root's attribute
The story has Pokemon like pets along with cultivation which increases as pets become strong. The world building is great with lotmof variety of pets, different skill strengthened from training of pets. The MC is rational and story starts out well. What I like:There are no stupid young arrogant masters and needless conflictsThe fights are good.There is no stupid system which makes MC overpowered. The cheat cannot be really called a cheat too. He just can identify few stronger pets.There is no sudden powerful orMC being insanely kucky.This is the best story of the all trial reads. It's a notch higher than all pet stories translated here. Pkease vote for it instead of stupid senseless system story written by author with a IQ of a child.
I nice short story with a lot of content packed into each chapter. While the writing style is good, there are no use of breaks or lines to separate content, which can cause some confusion when there are shifts in perspective during a chapter. Apart from that it is worth reading if you want a short fast paced story.Most important for me, is that it is a properly finished story, including an epilogue. A refreshing change from the usual “completed” stories due to hiatus or dropped content, usually ending on a cliffhanger to boot.
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