warning ! Warning ! ( it's only for man of culture )Guys you won't be disappointed .. I'm currently around 42 chapter .. .and ( creepy grin ) it's some good stuff .
It is a pretty nice novel compared to most of the novels on this sit and. would love to see it be picked. ?. .
Hey author, is it necessary to read this to read Guardian of the end? Like is the mc in guardian of the end related to mc of this novel or something?
This is a really nice packed action story. Its like reading some sort of "Gudan" anime. If you want to read a story full of battles, then you may give it a shot.Writing Quality: The only drawback here is the writing quality. It has some minor issues, and some sentences is a bit hard to read. Nothing a good rewrite can't resolve :)All in all, keep up the good work!
I have been a fan of the book for over a year now , and this is what I would like to say for the book 5 stars definitely , there are no major grammar mistakes or plotholes and the world building and story development are excellent.The author's way of description is second to none , you can visualise the terrain , the fight sequences and the characters easily as it feels 3D. As an author myself , i can say that this is one of my top 3 stories that i learnt from the most and is one of my all time favourites .It's been relevant on the platform for years now and even after 900+ chapters the story is gripping and there is no repetition. So in the end all i want to say is thankyou Avans for all the hard work.
.The Author is back with another work again! First of all, I would like to commend the interesting character introductions. It's impressive and easy to understand. The quality of the chapters does not disappoint but rather it will make you want to read more. Even though it has only 10 chapters, I can definitely say that this novel has potential. So what are you waiting for? Go and give it a try!
when i read the reviews i honestly felt like i probably wouldn't like this novel but this novel, However i was pleasantly surprised by how much i've enjoyed it. The main character is likeable and has a visible depth and as the novel progresses his growth is obvious to the reader. There is intrigue, there is sex, there is drama. Everything is in this novel, and everything is well thought out and planned and any issues that are in the novel the author is very interactive and discusses them and remedies if need be. And tbh i cant really find any fault apart from minor grammar issues. And for all those who are wondering, NO. There is no NTR and should read the novel and see for yourself.
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Truly one of the great novels on this, or any, web novel style site. Piokilek’s mastery of weaving a deep and meaningful story with well developed characters is a tribute to his abilities as an up and coming professional novelist. This was my first experience with his writing style, and I can state with confidence that each of his other novels are as well developed as this story.
If you like harem novels with a great cast of characters, or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story about Xuefeng and his strong and beautiful women. The story grabs you and pulls your heartstrings from the very beginning.
I tried, I really did.
I don't think the story per se is that bad. It's mostly mediocre and cliche heavy.
What made my rating fall under 3 stars is mostly the writing quality. The text is riddled with spelling errors and the grammar is all over the place. An editor or at least a proofreader could easily improve the quality by 1 star.
The other point that I didn't like about this story would be the story development. MC makes a lot of really groundless and stupid decisions. Especially in the beginning, I get that the author tried to create a desperate/bad situation for his character but since most of the problems MC has come from his own stupidity I can't and won't feel sorry for him at all.
All in all I would say, the writing quality (spelling, grammar) needs a lot of work and the story development is at most so so (readable if you have nothing better to read). The rest is average.
Would only recommend if you have a lot of time to kill, aren't bothered by bad spelling/grammar and don't expect anything special.
Hope I could help :)
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