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The story seems good and has a lot of potential.Its enjoyable but I HAVE to say this, the Grammar was a Disaster...... How do you make mistakes like is almost every line? Write the narration in past tense and the conversation in the present tense....Thats how you are supposed to go. I would love to complete this novel but please with better translation, otherwise it was truely a torture for me.
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HE MADE A BOOK ABOUT MILFS that's enough to get the five.only thing that can compete is ****** before i five onto this book i would like to say
This book's setting should be American since the characters are American... however..the author writes using Chinese setting ..I mean Chinese way of life like calling people Master Raul.. vegetable king Kelvin and so on is typically Chinese.... author please stop this and make the book more American.. American people are always proud and nosy.. Chinese like to compare between themselves and slander each other...the Mc is also typically Chinese because he seems to fall in love easily and being swayed by the female leads.. anyway the novel is a good one...the grammatical errors are few ..the author should continue with this book..
To preference, I am 400+ chapters in.The story starts off a little slow, but the premise is really good. I love the fact that the world is rather similar to ours yet so different. It’s also not a mafia world in the way you expect it to be, more so a magical world with mafia principles. But the MC (Ain) is just the best, and I really like how as the story progresses you get more fleshed out characters other than her. The world is not sololy based on her view so it makes it rather interesting. 10/10 would recommend.
literally peak fiction
my cup of tea
basically, the mc is a villain, (if u couldn't tell) but so far, the villain is winning. he has godtier powers and stuff as well
I am really looking forward. Story is saddening but appealing. Especially Daniel what a wonderful person he is shown to be. I hope he gets happiness,he is really heartbroken.
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I was so happy that a new detective novel is on this trial read but left with only disappointed while reading it .
Have some doubt regarding the book with how the first chapter was , but still went onwards. But left hopeless.
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The system directly shows the entire crime scenes as mc approaches the site .
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A mc which having problems to keep his **** in his pants.
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The completely flawed and broken crime management system.
Petition to bring back The Era of Gods!.........................................................................................................
Stop Thrashing RI your shameless copy cat!! Just it nothing to read here it's now becoming of these type of trash like I got 10000x system or my bla bla can move this and that... Just #uck off these people.. Sorry don't take it personal but if you take it.. I don't care
MC daughter didn't even take his words seriously and he didn't know how to discipline them which makes the plot repeats every time what make it worse that the girls always disobeys him because he always forgive them everytime