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Ki lagcha guru it's not Macdonalds still I am loving it
Good so far. I wonder what it will be like.
Some pretty good stuff. I think you do well to make his weakness bearable. The power system was just explained 30-35 chapters in but I was quite confused early on but no matter. Anyways this has some good potential and I’ll be following this (hopefully) daily, so don’t drop author :)
great book, characters act realistically and the world is developing. sadly, there's not much more I can say as there are only 16 chaps out at the moment.
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It's surprising that this novel doesn't have much reviews, maybe because the video game genre(not popular) . Anyways this actually a solid novel with interesting story that keeps you wanting for the next chapter. The MC isn't shy of spilling "some" blood to reach his goal and he doesn't have any cheat, other that his decisiveness and wits. The other thing that I love about this story is the fights, they're very very exciting and rather easy to imagine.An important note:( SPOILER):??the powers that the players gain in the game can also be used in reality, and this is also one of the main reasons of why I like this novel.
I was searching for this kind of books and I got this by chance . This book shouldn't be judged by views because even though it has less views this book is amazing ❤️ if I must say. I love each and every character in the book . Highly recommendable book?. I'm really very curious to know what happens next I literally think about this book every once in a day. But there are two things like to mention here ... sometimes author gives so much explaination iit's like half of the chapter is only explaination and other thing is very slow updates.. until today whatever chapters has been released I read and waiting for next chapter but updates are like once in 1 or 2 months.. I'm not going to drop the book because it's amazing other than two issues mentioned above. I just hope author can give updates on atleast weekly basis
While the story is so far is decent, it's a bit confusing considering the grammar is kind of jumbled up together. Also none of the quotations or spacing are there to separate words from actions and characters talking so that makes it confusing as well.
Pro: good start.
Interesting world
Dark feel
Cons : forced romance
Ntr
And the biggest one : the mc
Honestly it's more of a personal taste
But i can't root for the mc in fact i began
To dislike him lol, way too naive and
Foolish , similiar to japanese mcs.
In conclusion : read with caution, there are a lot of dealbrakers but if you don't mind them it will be a good read.
So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!
A great story truly. A character who isnt born with some cheat type system or innate talent with a normal background this is the type of story that is rarely seen in webnovel and as for the world background its very complex and the story shows you the dark side of human psycology instead of the all hero and all good stories where the protoganist is as pure as an angel. The only Con is its updating speed is getting a lot slower as the author has to focus his time on his main novel.