Love everything about the story, keep it up.
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Awesome book keep it up!
I would say more but I'm trying not to spoil anything.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Legit though, the best feature is that the characters are not static but have changing personalities all the time. Some people might not like that, personally I do love it. They always learn from their experiences
Good, I love this book $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The situation the MC was in at the beginning was really painted for me, and I was able to picture it happen as I read it. His interaction with the mysterious events, consistently seeking for answers, that don't get answered right away helps push the MC in the right direction. I really enjoyed the relationship between the orb and the MC, and hope this back and forth continues throughout the book. It is also nice to see a cultivation novel set in a science fiction story line, as it doesn't always work, but the author was able to make it work, and work well. Added to my library, can't wait to read more.
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MINOR SPOILERS ABOUT POWERS/PLOT!
(Didn't hide review due to spoilers, because the spoiler is very minor in my opinion)
I cannot claim to be a professional or even above avg. on reviewing books/novels. I consistently try to find good novels that have technology as the super power. What I've typically seen is that the MC seems to skip a lot of crucial steps in progression to what I assume is to just speed up the plot. I've enjoyed reading your characters thought process/actions he takes to build his company so far and thinking further than just making the best tech by starting from the resources themselves and not limiting himself to what we can recycle as of now. The way he uses his abilities, the length of time his training takes to get to an "Intermediate/Advanced" lvl and even him branching out into different fields to take advantage of his mind instead of just relying on his tech makes your MC seem more realistic (If you can call a super powered individual in a fictional universe realistic). Anyway, judging from the upload times and the reminder of this being a new thing for you in the description I know that writing isn't a top priority for you, but I would absolutely love to watch you find a genuine passion/obsession for writing this story and make this at least a decently long (300+ chapters) story.
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Best and hardest story to make a fanfic but author u done it and it is also good but you are misnaming some character (mc of your story and real story) and what timeline this story occurs??and where is (real story MC's) senior brother and junior sister??? . Finally waiting for fast chapters to read
I like this story, and I love your writing style. it's neat and not messy. the characters are also lovely, and the prologue hits different. overall this is a great one! highly recommended.