MC is stupid & annoying which takes a lot away from the story. It becomes a lot lackluster in important scenarios. The world background is also lacking in details & the storytelling is confusing
It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interactionIt's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction
Great story background could use a little more detailing like what year they are in and what the continent/ world they are in is called, I haven’t seen any other problems with the story it’s great every other way just needs a little more background knowledge
The story's alright if you don't have much else to read. It's simply about a reincarnated gamer and with his advanced knowledge profits and becomes the best.
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It's just typical transmigration story like other stories in Webnovel.MC get back to the past, have beautiful females on his side, bullied, learning superb skills that only he knowsIt's just so-so in my opinion
This is my first ever review on webnovel . I am truly impressed by how good the story is . The characters and the world seems very real and very much alive . the writing style of the novel is also incredible. the main character is a person who likes to fool around but is still insightful enough as when he needs to be serious . the other side characters also are truly people instead of manifestation of one single trait . there is one character wen yingjie who appears for 7-8 chapters but he is like a classic webnovel main character . this story is really good but i have one complaint that cases are a bit too long the first case took around 50 chapters and case 4 also seems like a lengthy case . i just want the story to progress a little bit quickly
Me gusta mucho lo malo es que no ha actualizado y creo que ya no lo ara pero es muy buena para mí a mí me gusta mucho y espero que vuelva a escribir y le deseo buena suerte y salud al escritor
I tried to give this story a chance. I really did. However, the author introduces concepts without much thought. He says one thing when he means another. At a certain point, it looks like there are just missing chapters. He introduces a character, Irene, but never explains how she meets up with the MC. For a number of chapters, the author refers to a chicken seller. No idea if this is slang for something or if it means exactly what it says. The reason for my confusion, is that the MC doesn't have any chickens. At least none were introduced. I will have to stop reading the story at this point. The MC has started making plans, and is thinking to himself, but it is not done in a logical or coherent manner causing the reader to have difficulty understanding the thought process of what is going on.
Now it may just be me, but I think this story started with good potential... slowly descending into something disappointing.The summary caught my attention, and for a long while, I was one of the ones who cheered whenever I saw a new chapter being released.However, it sort of ended up as the typical story with approximately the same structure as other copy and paste stories with a little tweaks.The MC starts interesting. He has memories or in the case of the story ‘dreams’ of another world, namely ours. His master (the person who raised him) is dead, and there are two people who come to cancel his engagement with this talented girl. He is a doctor and botanist. And because of those foundations and a game like system, he slowly becomes stronger and has the ‘talent’ to become a dream master, the best occupation in the setting... apparently...We see him surpass many people including that girl he was engaged to, becoming a monstrous talent (never before seen), become a pivotal role in a war, and in a few chapters become on par or stronger than the leader he was following during that war.And then we just have him becoming increasingly apathetical. He experiments on his patients to improve and explore his medical skills, kidnaps/locks away people to extract their memories and secrets (with the consequences of fantasy-reality distortion and madness), altering a life’s memories to benefit himself, and just kills whoever pisses him off or blocks his way.The subordinates around him are more or less indebted to him. Zhou Wenwu for guiding him and helping to exact revenge against the person who annihalated his family, the pill maker and his talented adopted sister for taking them out of a complicated situation and basically defending them from thug (ish) people, and a Zhang guy whom previously had conflicts between them, but settled the misunderstanding and got his life saved in the process...In the end, the basic points of the story that got me interested in the first place was covered and rewritten by how the story developed. The initial character building seems to be unimportant or unneeded. And the side characters just seem like ornaments after their backstory is explained.Of course it is still enjoyable to those that liked the above mentioned or are looking for something to fill up time, but honestly, I can’t see how this would turn out other than a OP protagonist with almost ZERO remorse or sense of death. (Especially since he literally trains in his dream, which makes him literally God.)Translation Quality: 5Stability of updates: 5Story development: 2Character design: 2 (was 4)World Background: 3*my English is bad when typing on a phone, plz don’t mind that...
A novel about a professional swindler and how they system and the start forces him on the path to be the history's number 1 founder. But later on he strives to reach that even with out the system to re point where the system isn't something that pushes him but he made it his tool to achieve that goal. I like the comedy it makes me laugh .I never for a second felt the story get stuck maybe slowed but rhat adds to its charm. The cultivation levels are explained so far. Also the fights description in my eyes is good. I don't remember the author going too much into details with them like he did 30° angle kick and the other dude dodge by...... Bla bla you get it.the only thing I wished to see that I didn't is like side chapters showing us the thoughts of lin feng disciples and how they felt and though when the MC first showed up.all in all I'm looking forward to seeing how this story blooms and unfolds.og in almost forgot the concept of hn1f is unique and let's say rare that's another reason why I like it its different from usually wuxia where mc gets trashed then goes on a journey to opness after heavens blessing.
The story is pretty good with the MC going around catching pets, like in Pokémon Go, but with the twist that some pets have unique abilities. Would recommend.