Good nightYour story is as addictive as an anime. Each chapter makes me feel like I'm seeing full color in everything you tell. I really hope this book gets the recognition it deserves, it's very good.
Honestly a pretty interesting story, flow might be a bit slow, but not too slow. For the grammar junkies this story should not be a problem to read either. Anyway just wanted to leave a good review to boost it up a bit considering it is more interesting than many others who seem popular for no reason.
It's bland. Wow. MC GETS TO CHECK IN TWICE FROM TWO BLOODLINES! SO OP! SO GREAT! It's really important as his check-in ability is limited? Not really. It doesn't really matter. He checks in every now and then. It's basically overpowered MC without comedy or real motivation to exist...
I'm tired of this scenario. You are not a god, you are ahead just because you have acquired these abilities, otherwise your destiny is to die in pain. As someone who loves evil mc, this novel is 0.
Mage....Seems like western fantasy..I'm voting................Now need to add 140 character ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ok.
13/05/2018I’ve read up to chapter 7, and I have to say that I’m hooked! I have no problem reading though the story, not a lot of grammatical errors. The author spent time preparing the story like kneading the dough before baking it. I don’t mind waiting a bit for action, if that means the author would have time to really prepare and write a good action scene. So far the story is about the MC reincarnating into the world he created, but the things that he used to know are altered by AI system of the game. I’m going to wait and see how this story develops. I hope it will lean on the magic and spell-casting side, but I know there will be some sword play since the he will be the spellsword or something. Please don’t go the normal sword-master-with-some-magic route, the way you introduced the magic system seemed really good.In conclusion, the story is a good read. However, it’s still in its early stages, we will have to wait and see how it will develop.
I going to need more chapter to get my blood pumping or should I imaging the whole thing into my head which will keep going but it nice;you got this author when I am older and start my own novel it will be so much hype ! Do a great job and maybe you might bring alots of stuff for us to read like anything just keep working do not stop
When are you going to update also i live your story it is on my top five list!!! And that saying something because i have read like 400+ books
what a trashy novel,if you have to pay for every facility in your own sect then what's the point of joining itwho gives payment to live in their own sect/home
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This a whole new concept and prett interesting read that have fallin in love with. I truly love how the story developing I can’t wait for more espically when he joins the sect