i liked it pls update soon can't wait to fall in love. with love
just finished reading. nice storytelling. looking forward to your next story
Ok so far new to this site and all the stories
I love the way you place you descriptions. I've read all the way to chapter seven and added it to my library. Thanks for the lovely book. I'm looking forward to reading much more
This is the second time I have read this book and can’t wait for your next book about Lucy and Blaze (as I rub my hands together)
This is still an awesome book with awesome characters and of course an awesome author
Awesome book u have going here. I love it ???
Really enjoyed this book! Great job Author!
been following this for 2 years now... book is good and very detailed. but the updates.... im wondering if the author has abandoned the story. pls show that this story lives.
It's pretty bad. The writing style is just not good at all; there's too much telling rather than showing. Instead of having the character witness something cruel and question it through dialogue or other means, the author simply states, "Mu Yu thought about the cruelty of it all." I understand what the author is trying to convey, but it feels very forced and makes me cringe.
The characters and their interactions are also lackluster. The main character (MC) and his senior sister’s exchanges feel unnatural and more childish than I’d prefer. Then, he suddenly develops a crush on her, despite her not having any positive traits showcased in the writing—forced.
There’s another character named Ximen Buixue, who is supposed to be a funny playboy, but he’s not funny at all; he’s more of a creep. The banter between him and the MC is unbearably cringe-worthy and goes on for too long.
, if you’re sensitive to really bad writing like me, don’t even bother. The author doesn’t improve after 100 chapters.
I just finished
Is the mtl comprehensible?
A big mistake, I skipped the genre CATEGORIES part and went directly to the f***k*ng tags "BEAUTIFUL PROTAGONIST"
Darn it. My eyes and my brain got "soiled."