Nice just a good start just waiting for a next story how fastvu can please update 1st as it can be??waiting!waiting..waiting for urbnext suspension part please
The mc is a racist piece of shit. Oh and he is a rapist psychopath too . . .
A good novel overall, typos here and there with overall good character development. Generic "mc gets transported into a novel he's reading/writing" but the mc is a teacher this time according to the cover will be like Johan. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
Very slow story but also very consistent. Maybe all the Status could be better used and also better developed, but that doesn't bother me.What I liked the most was the dialogues between the characters, the quality of the dialogues is much better than everything else. Too many grammatical mistakes.
Whats the MC like? Is he cold, indifferent, evil or is he lame, boring and a simp? If its not the first half I’m out
The author is here to shamelessly give himself a good review. Also, he'd like to report the first six chapters have all been rewritten.Please feel free to leave a comment here.this story is open to suggestions, as we all try to make this work the most overpowered work on the site.Hope you enjoy it!
Saya membaca buku ini Tidak terasa sudah sampek updateTerbaruSemoga update selanjut nya lebih banyak bab , semangat untuk penulis semoga sukses
good novel, I really enjoyed reading it until the middle of the chapter, unfortunately the recent chapter is too dark, having to get down from my library. thank you, goodbye and good luck ^ _ ^
It's contain great tips, just reading even 1 chapter per day is enough to give people great insights about how to write fiction, but this is not intended to be a must-follow guide, all writers eventually have to develop their own writing philosophy by themselves, so proceed at your own caution.
Really interesting, I like the time skip that way we can move on to the important things as a mage and the future. The novel in itself is really nice. Would love to know more about the world background. No big grammar mistakes. I recommend this novel.
The poor children in the heat i didnt get that far in the story but the start is good and sad but good but i still wonder is he going to save that one girl from that thing or jist die there and not save her i am not sure if she lives or dies because i just read the info but i did read the story well the beginning☺
So bad, don't waste you're times for this.So bad, don't waste you're times for this.So bad, don't waste you're times for this.So bad, don't waste you're times for this.