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She was surprising to see that cute girl was lying in front of her. "Eh!" Mei stood up then moves backward while the girl was getting up and stood up looking at Mei with a very sharp eye.
With the sudden invasion of these new races, all the races became panic and alert.
He could hear his voice being called in the distance from those who were searching for him.
The village elder gaped at the sight of the gold coin. The other villagers almost popped their eyes out for seeing the gold.
When these chapters are posted they will replace any chapters currently up but I don't intend to do that until I have a decent number of chapters ready (at least 30) as I lack an editor The time taken will have to be extended to ensure quality as I take additional passes at my work
"I wouldn't dare to decline, would I?" Elder Quint smiled.
A doorbell rang and Albus slowly opened her eyes. Her mind had finally regained the clarity it should have.
At that an extremely tall, outrageously muscular old man with tattered monk robes, dark skin and bald head entered her carriage with heavy steps that made the whole thing shake heavily at each movement of his, keeping his head and shoulders low to not hit the ceiling thanks to his absurd height.
Witch is burned to death, she has no chance of going there? To whatever safe haven you
Unfortunately, he did not get what I meant. His face was blank when I looked at him again. After a while, he repeated to point at me and his nose.
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To start, I've seen so many people complaining about the slow pacing of the novel. Please understand that it is a SCHOOL SETTING, you should be expecting relatively slow pacing. How many novels with school settings have fast pacing? Generally not very many. When you see that it's a school setting, this pacing is what you are signing up for.On another note, the novel has decent to good character development and world building due to the "filler" chapters (if you think that these chapters are filler then I'm sorry that your IQ is in the double digits). Whilst it isn't the best novel, its refreshing to see a novel that places emphasis on characters and its world rather than meaningless action. If anything, the action based chapters are the worst part of the novel as they do nothing to advance the story or develop the characters/world and are clearly the most filler-like parts of the novel.
