Classic Game lit system story and the best part about the story is the game itself. It is very intriguing. The writing is awesome, lucid and flows well. The story pacing is pretty good, and I have shared my feedback with the author about story development in the chapter comment. When the game starts, it is worth the wait. The world building is done beautifully, both in the premise of the game and inside the game itself. The MC is very likeable, boy next door, easy to connect with. The great thing is despite this being a first person, the author doesn't have any unnecessary internal monologues which can be super annoying. Expositions are done expertly. Great work, author. I will keep it in my library simply because I wanna take notes, as a fellow system writer, lol. Please keep writing. <3
I way prefer the whole VRMMO but now is a real world over the standard "VRMMO but go back 2 years". The whole 'this company spent millions designing content for only one player to get' or 'unfair advantages for the first player' or 'secret systems that no of the other millions of players think of' just are dumb. People aren't that stupid, and I appreciate it when an author doesn't lower the IQ of humanity by 100 points so their main character can dominate.
Wow this author is really shameless, 3 times of deleted review already cause it was getting likes from the readers since they can relate to what I said that it was full of inconsistency and we,with the author, even argued about it but dude just said "go make your own novel and make one thats better than harry potter lmao. So here I am again to make a review to counter your shamelessness of deleting low rating reviews.** Im gonna make one again if you delete this again so yah
This story is so bad. The MC is a useless idiot who gets bullied by a guild leader in to joining after making an enemy of the king for a stupid reason and not working for him. I could not read many chapters before having to give up.
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It's fine. Nothings bad about it. Nothing about it that Excells either. Just not my cup of tea. No reason for dropping it. Just doesn't stick out to me as something. If love to keep reading.
if you like *incredibly* and totally insanely written amazing fight scenes then this is for you.the novel is written like its a western magic story but in a cultivation setting its actually a kind of fresh take on the genre imo and everything is explained in ways other cultivation stories don't even try to explain (more realistic and not to "info dump"-y). so far I might dare say this is starting to be one of the best cultivation stories out there!so yeah definitely worth reading!P.S. there are some smexy time scenes (only rarely tho) ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Interesting novel. More Unique compared to other novels I have read in trial read……………………………………….…………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
One of the best idol novel I have read for now. The only issua I have with it is that the man lead have no hurdle or obstacles. It’s a way too easy road to success for him
Intereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssstttttttttiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnggggg??? yes that is right, this novel is interesting. I really like MCs that are not the average good guy, but rather interesting and a good story to tell.
so i wrote this review to get free pass and i need to write 140 characters so im gonna make this long and im so close i have nothing to talk about