SO IS THIS BOOK DONE OR WHAT?? ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE NEW CHAPTERS WHERE PUT OUT!!
I read until chapter 119, and I can't help but give a 5 star review. while I don't cry a lot, the author knows exactly what it feels like to be a broken person. I know you can do everything you want with your story, but Please make it a not so sad end for the protagonist. You know exactly what I mean, even if real life isn't that great, dreaming about a happy alternative should still be allowed. Thank you for showing what it is like to be unable to connect with others on an emotional level.
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Overall, I do love the story.
In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so.
System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards.
I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
Hey , i mean the novel is ok , but nothing special , i was very interested in the first 20 chapters as it didnt seem so -cliche- . after some time it downgraded in quality . There is so many characters that were introduced to not be seen ever again .
Around chapter 400-500 there are so many ,,intermission chapters´´ with side characters you know a a thing to zero about.
So to end my review - The writing quality - downgrading over time , Stability - there is one [img=recommend] , Story Development - close to none , we just moving about one kingdom for 300/350 chapters and constantly reminded how big the world is , but nothing is shown [img=faceslap], Character Design - Hard to say , but the MC is designed ,,ok´´ but other characters are just 2D sketch of what they should be.
I am... disappointed. I’m at chapter 573. I haven’t seen him properly teach his students other than a pep talk about life. He either uses Soul Imprint or it gets skimmed over. I don’t even know what rank his students are for over a hundred chapters. There is so much potential in his student’s background that the MC OBVIOUSLY can tell but doesn’t do anything.
DON’T get me STARTED on his choices with system knowledge. He has had multiple rewards that he could choose the knowledge he recieves. He never chose something to help his LITERALLY DYING students.
The time emblems. The Fking Time emblems. My god are they op, But that’s not what I care about. It’s how he hasn’t Spam bought them from the store and used it to get knowledge. He could have used it to learn spirit runes and save Jiang Cheng, HIS STRONGEST STUDENT AT PEAK CONDITION MIND YOU, by chapter 100. Yet, he uses it on nonsense like The Great Formless Divine Art which he KNOWS is the literal PEAK INHERITANCE of one of the NINE GREATS. He is going to die by using it, yet he focuses on it over his insanely other far more OP manuals.
And the system. The system, ah. We have such great heart to heart moments with it, then it talks about killing the MC if he can’t complete a task. The author only obviously puts something like that in as pressure, but it completely ruins the story. It simply means the MC is forced to do what the system sets up, or he legitimately dies. He has no freedom to choose his future. It basically tells us EXACTLY how the story ends. He either dies - or the school reaches the Nine Greats. I also hate when the system compares him to past hosts. Just recently we had an inner system monologue that had the system say that the MC is in the top 5 of its past hosts. Sorry author, as readers, he will be the best. So why the h*ll would you write that? Like actually though? The system has potential in the way it shows emotions, yet that gets thrown out the window when it talks of killing the host. It’s a parasite. A massive potential ruined by cliché writing. A disappointment.
P.S. WHY TF HASN’T THE MC SPENT 50k POINTS ON TIME EMBLEMS AND USED THEM ON THE DIVINE SIGHT? HE CAN SAVE ALL OF HIS STUDENTS IF HE CAN SEE THEIR TRUE CONDITIONS. PAPAYA GIRL IS A LITERAL GOD BUT THE SYSTEM RATES HER AT EXTEMELY LOW POTENTIAL BECAUSE YOU DON’T LEVEL ITTTTTT.
P.P.S. Screw the potential ratings. They ruin the story. Lu Zhurou obviously has something special going on but is rated to be extremely low. It’s obvious, yet the system rates it as so. Jiang Chen is ruined by spirit runes and was rated Low. It’s something obviously fixable. Yet, his POTENTIAL is low. Stupid BS. I’M angry. Novel has such amazing potential.
To author Devil_Paragon,
This is the 2nd book that I just finished reading. I really like it, the plot, the character design and development, all the works in this book captures me just like your first one.
I know your having financial difficulties right now as well as I am too. I just hope that you can finished this story for us your avid readers.
I am going to read your 3rd book now even if it is not yet finished because I know in the future you will complete it all.
Thank you and more power.
I like this story so far it's unique and gives off another experience in reading novels about VR I look forward to more updates. For new people who have doubts just read a couple of chapters and I bet you will be hooked
really enjoyed this book for it's creative way of thinking about your kindom orientation massive multiplayer online role play games. definitely recommend
This is awesome, the theme of revenge really piqued my interest and the grammar really good. The story pace is slow but every chap that I read makes me want to continue.