Martin_Den_Katte
I just finished the chapter 104, it ruined my life, wdym by its was all a dream i cant keep living knowing this
I will be updating on a dailywelcomed basis and making sure my audiences are well informed.. stay tuned and let me know what you think of my story. please any ideas are welcome
Cons:
1. The writing or rather translation here is quite clunky and author or translator sometimes forget the facts that they have established as times go on.
2. Mc used be quite low key and cautious but after the 400th chapter, there is 180 change in his personality, becoming a flamboyant, blood thirsty and radical person which is quite a jarring and sudden change.
3. The ending is quite abrupt as well, there is way more to the world and plot which were setup earlier, however we don't see any of them. worse of all is that by the time the story ends the mc isn't even that strong in his own world, so kinda disappointed because of that as well.
overall if you can turn off ur brain to the translation issue and occasional logic breakdown, u might enjoy this since this is main a slice of life, cultivation, mystery and fantasy in the first 400 chapters.
Poop novel to be honest, dont fking read it. The author recycle the same fcking plot such as restaurant plot, lover plot, revenge plot, surprise lvl cultivation plot, aren't dead enemies plot and so on...
Well, the main character gets cucked, which the author didn’t even bother to warn about, which is quite the annoying thing thung to deal with when you expect a decent novel
Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter..
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say hi to racism if u want to read this novel
they have foreign competition
it's just like most of other novels in this genre
the mc will make a company and blah blah
concept is good hope any author who is reading can write this story in an alternative universe and without romance
that would be legit good and don't add real world to it
the book is nice super nice in fact 8 like it if only the could update more Chaters pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee
There really isn't much to say about this novel, if you've been reading TLed Eastern Fantasy novel's for a respectable amount of time you've probably read quite a few novels like this. This doesn't try to do anything unique with the tropes, no gimmick, just a safe, generic predictable, plot I could guess in my sleep.
Perhaps this could be slightly interesting to someone completely new to the whole disciple multiplication trope but otherwise this really isn't worth your time, I could describe this novel in one word: Pedestrian.
Despite this, I'll be generous and give this novel a passing grade (referring to the hollow "5 stars" above, not my actual score at the end of the review) since recently, the standards on Webnovel have somehow managed to fall further and again this could be alright to a newbie or just someone who isn't tired of stuff like this.
This'd get a higher score if I wasn't tired of it but this is as generous as I can get. 1.5/5.
After 135 chapters.
Very fun and relaxing to read, made myself laugh many times while reading. I would say the world is easy to imagine and envision and story is overpowered with fun elements, looking forward to more.
I really love your story but I wonder why you stopped updating. Who offended you?
MC IS BEYOND STUPID. You will get very mad reading this at times. You will ask yourself "Author, why?" as you try to read this b.s.
If you like stupid MCs who dont think but are somewhat strong with a bunch of luck, please read
