Why am I laughing ????? good start I am liking this protagonist more and more ?????? I feel so bad for so reason ???? 2 chapters and I am laughing crazily ????
I genuinely have no idea who anyone is or what is even going on. This is just not readable. That’s all there is plain and simple. It’s not readable or understandable to anyone.
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the concept seemed nice but it's trash.Alle the first 25/30 chapters (and i mean ALL) are only about how trash is the class of the mc. You are forced to hear the opinions of practically the entire school and their grandmas. If you take away all the comments about how trash is the mc you probably won't have even 3 chapters worth of plot
The world is interesting and has alot of potential. One thing I am worried about the progress in strength in these 40 chapters is alot, so either it will be a short book or more strength levels will be added in the future
This novel irritated me so much. The author has to remind me non stop that the MC is by no means talented and comes from a common family etc.And no matter how many incredible power ups the MC gets, his friends etc always stay around his power level because plot armor. Also the MC is incredible dense, for god sake.. when you are 13-15 years old you do know whats going on between men and woman. Also, half of the story is filled with chapters about the MC eating so much and people reacting crazy to it + every fight there has to be paragraphs of golden dragon body transformation and dragon roar descriptions... It's just boring to be honest.There is a lot more irritating stuff like the stupid blacksmith chapters that are all more or less the same about him hammering alloys and shocking people about his young age and blacksmith star level. TLDR: This story got massive plot armor with a dense MC and lots of repetitive writing. Boring side characters who all have there secrets and author reminds you of those things all the time but it takes hundreds if not thousands of chapters and hundreds of author reminders before you get an explanation.
The major flaw of this novel is the MC.It is almost like there are two different people living inside him. The Master and the Child.The Master is calm and composed, remembers the life and experience of the alchemy emperor and is generally well adjusted.The Child appears every time the author needs to show just how awesome the MC or his Chinese heritage is. I really don't get why glorifying yourself and your country is such a big deal. The child is also a attention seeker. But, a split personality is not really a no go for a novel. The trouble starts when the Child does stupid things that only serve to delay the progress of the story as well as causing troubles for the Master to solve.In one moment the MC is composed and knows when to act, but in the next he seeks trouble everywhere.But don't take my word for it. Let me give you an example.MC needs to take a basic alchemy exam to be able to rent a furnace. It is a 24h available online only exam.What the MC needs to do is get it done. What he does is take the maximum number of available exams in one go.There is literally no benefit, as far as we and the MC at that point in time know, to taking more exams. But the child seeks attention.At school the avarage grade MC shows of knowledge about seals he should not know, but because of his lucky chance he is now a native speaker of the otherworldly language. As a result he gains scrutiny by his teacher and classmates, a rival who will continue to antagonize him and a possible one sided love interest. There is no benefit to standing out, no grades no additional resources. He literally does it to show off and embrace the class monitor (antagonist).The MC lack of common sense, the stupid attention seeking and his desperate pleas for other to notice his unusual increases in strength do not fit his background as a hard working poor student who is used to being disadvantaged.Anyone who has been overlooked and disadvantaged by the extended family and the public at large will gain at least a little bit of maturity and a sense of caution. Not to mention his father shows how to keep quiet while working towards a better future.Even the younger sister shows a very mature attitude. An attention seeker would have never had a good relationship with a disabled sibling who by default would have needed much more care and attention.All of this before the MC gained centuries of experience and knowledge.The idea and framework of the novel are wasted by the author because he desperately tries to increase word count by creating useless conflicts while regularly destroying his own characterization of the MC.
I really like this novel!!!! So much! I really get insulted when i read this novel! Im. From chemistry department but until now i still not make a paper that accept. I already read until chapter >100 and the story is good, Eventhough i didn't understand about the research (like carbon nanotube, Theory number, ect) ? i really get insulted when i read this!!! Hahaha
No sukuna, not by far, sukuna is not the kind of person who would change by spending time with a woman, sukuna decimated villages whether women or children, sukuna decimated thousands of families, he killed for fun. If you wanted to make a hero sukuna, you could simply have made a reincarnation of someone asking to be the sukuna in mha.
Review should be more than 140 characters Alright fine
My only issue here is author writing, and grammar. He put too much 'would' when even that didnt make sense.Byung would, Kwon would, Cho would, anybody fkn would. Story wise its interesting to be honest, but all those mistakes just build up more and more till they make the story uncomfortable to read.
Ok! First of all I would like to say good job for your imaginative and descriptige writing! It made me much more easier to imagine the scenerio.The story pace is also ok! Keep up the good work author!