The cover, the title it's just good
thus sounds very interesting . .
I have to say I'm astonished to find such a well written story here on Webnovel. The amount of depth and quality in the writing of characters, world setting, and personality overall is amazing. This qualifies as a good story that I could see being published with a bit of tweaking, so I highly recommend this book to anyone who's tired of 1 dimensional characters and cardboard worlds with no depth. This book has amazing potential and I believe it's worth the wait for its updates.
I enjoyed reading your novel, but the story in the end of chapter 2 was cut, haha. But im still proud of you i like the plot twist of your story, Im satisfied on how you make the story mysterious in the end of the chapter. Im still curious on how hannah takes care of marc because of the injuries he has. Despite that, i kinda love your novel i want to read more friend!!
i like this story. easy and understanding vocabularies. i recommend this novel.
I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way
totally garbage , makes no sense what is going on just mc doing stuff but even that's not understandable
The story is very interesting. The author can bring the reader as if they were in the scene and experienced the same thing. Understand how the suffering that the main character goes through for the sake of the family's happiness to decide to ally with the lord of darkness
Bru Stop this Princess cringe say at keast Prince. I hate it when Mcs are called Female names its over the top cringe and for this ant the fact that you locked the chapter WAYYYYY to early a solid 1 star review.Am ch 20
I have a question is the book any good if not are there any better pet ones cuz this is my first one and the comments have discouraged me from reading it cuz I wanna give pet ones a try and don't wanna start off with a bad one and end up giving up on the tag really easily when there are better ones that could have gotten me into the tag
Also sorry author if this discourages you
This is better then I expected. The only thing I can’t get over is how the Author keeps time skipping and summarizing the situation into a single paragraph. The Author could have easily made us emotionally invested. But instead, too many info jumps! Author needs to learn 'show not tell'.
It is uncertain if MC is smart or not. Only time will tell if this is good.
But honestly, though I hate to say it, this might be better then EER in terms of plot and organization. Though I think EER is better in terms of beginning.
Romance?: I won’t spoil names but I love her. However, I dislike how MC “crush” is mentioned often as it feels forced. A character with no significance in the story and isn't even aware of his existence. Yet MC can’t forget about her all these years. He didn’t even remember her name after a decade, so wtf? It was 'deep love' for just a small crush and you’d think his mindset would change after all these years.
It’s to soon to judge as we don’t know what path MC will take once he enters society. Hopefully, it’ll be like One-Punch Man.
yessss you picked this novel , I never lose hope and always believed that this would get picked. and the gods have answered my prayers and for that I spent coins for this novel and not fast pass