although the part where he was a coach for 10 years never won a match and was still coaching is kinda impossible to happen, it's just a small part in the novel mentioned about 3 times so don't judge this whole novel from this part it may be kinda shit part but i really like what came after it,the system is amzaing, the mc is good i like that he started on a very weak team and is building it up, i like the tactics, i like the way he dealt with the team in the beginning etc,the only thing i don't like is that the team grew too fast, where I'm at right now the match with Chelsea ended up 3-4 for Chelsea i would like it if the result ended 1-3 for Chelsea i know it's a novel and it's not supposed to be real but i can't help but feel like they should have taken about untill the start of the next season to do something like this if not moreotherwise it's good i like the journey untill now i would rate it as 6.8/10
Haha, I tried to give myself what I think to be a fair score. I just want to warn you guys, if you see this, that there's this irritating guy going around hating on a bunch of author's books because he doesn't like them. If you see one of his reviews here, you'll know who he is; just please read for yourself and form your opinion. As my lovely, intelligent readers, I'd ask you not to be dragged down by people who try to infect and stop people enjoying things they like.
I absolutely love your book, the setting, the main character and especially the skills he has.Keep up the good work.
A captivating read with rich world-building and complex characters. The plot is unpredictable, keeping you hooked from start to finish. Highly recommend
"A solid read. the main character is enjoyable to read. The story is engaging, even if it doesn't break new ground. Worth checking out for fantasy fans."
It's a beautiful story and indeed captivating , ivy is really a star and strong charactet
Hey guys its the author here. This message is just to tell all of the readers who happen to run into my book. If you enjoy it please add it to your collection and give me a review. If there anything I can improve in my work, please let me know as well. Thanks :))
ok, it's good novel. Power system is also very well made and detailed. But I want to give you a suggestion, please reduce the font size.
Just notice it got updated today hope the author continues to be honest. Also going to reread this again when i have time, i literally forgot everything in the story also hope the mc make the female lead's and her relationship official (since i kinda remembered that the she only considers theirselves as "friends")
Im in love. Its just so good, characters are point on and Hattie... oh Hattie...
this is an interesting piece and I'm enjoying every little bit of it. keep it up author
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