"You can pick any of these, but I want to see as you put it on!"
"Fire!" He shouted.
Bru Stop this Princess cringe say at keast Prince. I hate it when Mcs are called Female names its over the top cringe and for this ant the fact that you locked the chapter WAYYYYY to early a solid 1 star review.Am ch 20
My goodness this story is a hidden gem, I will be waiting for new chapters.
This provided excellent narration so that I always knew what was going on in the story, I enjoyed the author's use of laying out the scenes and scenery and at the end I wishing for more to read ,this was well done.
only 10 chapters in... so far it looks interesting!
good relaxing story for me without those cringey indifferent Mc everywhere..
looking forward to the next chapter.good luck author
Shame doesn't feed you, so there's no point in having shame.Try it, you won't regret it.Also, you might want to read this when you're alone...Along with wearing baggy pants...
Knowing some of your previous novels I have high expectations for this. I hope it continues to be so cute. Just reading their interactions puts a smile on my face. This one should play in the same Universe as “Epic of Caterpillar”, “Demon Queen Rebirth” and the others, right? Definitely looking forward for what’s happening in that Universe in the end.
The novel is a really good one. The plot is nice and the characters are entertaining, if you can ignore the little grammatical errors you'll definitely enjoy it.
The title attract me to read this novel but.. The mc supposedly a S ranker.. U know what is S ranker right, a veteran yes a veteran... But this mc is useless, a S ranker but a fool... Or in game a rank higher because someone pilot it but gameplay noob... This mc made by the author to be fanatic with strength and agility... Are u so weak irl or wat... I cannot continue to read it.. I rather read a children book than this...