The world building is very detailed. This novel is also a first that I have read which has three protagonists which makes it very unique as well. Although, the beginning doesn't have much dialogue- I feel that it isn't the determining factor on the quality of the writing and development of the plot. I think that the novel has a lot of potential and wish the author the best of luck!
Is there going to be chapters added to this novel as it is in trial read or is it going to stay at 0 chapters for a while? While the Heavens are not the same time for the rest of the devil in the raws it???
After reading 15 chapters. This novel has very good potential for top 100. Setting is good, character is unique unlike others where there's killing a lot and acting like a hero saving others. Translation is not good. Too many fault in Grammer. Give it consistency and daily updates; it'll surely spear
I am really really surprised that this novel isn't famous yet. I have never read such a cultivation novel in 5-6 years maybe I haven't read enough.....So the story is about Li tian our MC. Currently he is 12 years old. Story starts when he is 5 yrs and then straight to 8 yrs when the real adventure/ misfortune/ fortune starts for MC. Our MC is naive and gullible. Maybe weak and timid. People might hate such personality but give it a read further in the story. Nope it doesn't improve except the weak and timid part. He has very very low IQ. You can understand it from synopsis.... MC has trash talent in cultivation, can't remember difficult things, doesn't like reading, writing or going school. He is pure hearted, kind. Only 1 childhood friend takes care of him, fights for him. MC is taken away on a trip by his parents and abandoned. He meets an injured super strong cultivator. Since childhood he read 1000 virtues book and decides to help him. Next morning he asks the strong person to be his teacher and although he found that MC is idiot he took him his disciple.The strong cultivator took 1 year to recover and go to his continent. During that time he taught MC cultivation technique and most basic sword technique. When MC was left alone he met a strong dragon. Again the dragon found MC is idiot but teaches MC coz he was alone for 1000 years. 3 years later when dragon is about to die he tells MC his story and gives him a task. MC then goes out to and finds an academy test is going on. His talent is trash but his techniques and will power are amazing. He meets his childhood friend again.Now, writing quality is good. Very very less grammar mistakes. You will find how pitiful the MC is by the way world treats him and laugh at those moments when people try to teach him since MC can't understand simplest of the things. Characters are good. His family members and juniors, as usual in any novel, despise MC because of his talent and IQ. Except them people shown are good and not 1 dimensional. World background shown is little as for now. I have strong hope for this novel. Why? because I really cannot predict the future of MC. We have read many novels and most of the times we can predict what is going to happen and what path MC will take. In this case I cannot. Will he develop IQ or will he remain a moron? Will his talents improve, his spiritual root? will his comprehension increase? can he remember things? Only time will tell
May the baby master rabbink grant the poor young master with super beauty harem?. Poor young master has suffered enough. Mc needs to have 'fierce fights' with Aya, raina, luna, etc. so that he can remain motivated. Baby pure love is also fine.May the wish made in welling tree be fulfilled?.
This is definitely a good story, very refreshing, a bit bold.the way you express your faith is commendable. I respect that ! sure some might find including God(religion) into a story distasteful or offensive. but we can't please everyone ! so don't try to alter it or change your story because of a critic. May God bless you brother ! looking forward to reading more,
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I love your novel author. When it comes to your writing style, and the story itself. Keep up the good work author because of the end of the day, readers will look for your amazing works. Keep writing, author-san (correct if I'm wrong) ❤?
A must read.
So far I'm liking it. It gave a a good description on the characters and a good story. But there's no stability on the novel updates. Anything else is fine. Keep it up ?
Lol, I don't know how many reviews I'll make for this but for the confused souls out there who have take the time to read them...let me inform you of what this story may contain...BL=Boys Love(three chara seem to lean here)GL=Girls Love(one chara leans here)& Straight Romance(two chara lean here)And (pansexual???) MC that has vowed off romances/love so far. It's got action, betrayals, survival, mutants, Evolutionary, zombies, leveling(via cores and cultivation), fangirls, harem(vibe?), and its pretty informative without excessive use of it. This is all I've gathered after only 30 chapters. So hope its helpful, just don't turn away because of BL or GL, its pretty good if you can overlook that, cause that is obviously not the main focus of this story. The main focus is the way the MC handles everything in this Apocalyptic world.
Passionate!Fabulously written.Story development is amazing.The FL is strong, cunning, clever and smart.The sibling bond, the hidden truths, and revenge everything is first class! a must try book.