this book ? is the best so far.you are a wonderful writer at your level .
Yeah, I don't know, man. I'm 135 chapters in, and seeing this random dude show up called Long Chen repeatedly is annoying. Why add a cliche xianxa mc? To be a parody? It is not all that funny, to be honest. Just kill him off already... Oh, we can't because he is supposed to be a fucking parody. I even checked in the later chapters, and he is still around, lol. Come on, author; people have been complaining about him ever since he showed up. The author messes up on names quite often. This is supposed to be a harem novel, right? Where is the romance or harem in this novel? Our actual MC complains about not being able to bang a woman, but yet he's just chillin. I'll give another review when more chapters are released; however, I enjoyed the beginning of this quite a lot. I personally feel like it has been going downhill ever since this ”parody” showed up. At least the author is stable in updates, though.
A story about a kid who has a passion to become the world best baseball catcher but was met with a tragic accident
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No good..feng lei is better than him.. Feng lei should just be the mc, wat a irritating author.... waste of time....................................... ................................
Most people from WN and RR already know the settings for this novel. Beloved by everyone, missed by many...If only the Author didn't have his period back then
I'm still only in the early stages of reading through this novel, however I can definitely say this has been good read thus far with an interesting plot and some great translations.
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Translation Quality: Poor
The translator+'editor' combo can't even capitalize the names of players. On top of that, there are tons of notes either from author or translator mentioning stupid things such as: a quarter of an hour is equal to 15 minutes, 2nd tier is one tier less than 3rd tier, etc.. These things should be removed.
Story Development: Poor
I've read over 30 chapters in, and literally less than 45 minutes passed since he had entered into the game. Yes, I spent probably 2-4 times the amount of time reading 30 chapters than the minutes that passed by in-game.
Here's a breakdown of how the story goes:
2% plot
8% comments made by MC saying "as I expected" or "as I predicted"
30% reactions by the audience
10% beta testers wondering how MC did XX thing, even though there's only one possible answer
30% info dump and explanations of things
20% repetition of the same explanation in twenty different ways
Character Design: Poor
The only thing this MC knows how to say is "as I expected, ..." and "as I predicted, ..." He's supposedly some god-tier top 100 player, but in the beginning gets surprised by a level 5 city guard using a basic skill after being attacked. There are so many issues with the character design that it's too much effort to list them out.
As for other characters go, the sister didn't seem to have too bad of a set-up, but I haven't read far enough to see whether the author will mess up her design or not.
World Background: Average+
Look, this is a stereotypical VRMMO reincarnation story. Essentially, just imagine ROTSSG with some elements changed. While there are quite a few ignorant and wrong statements made regarding the IRL world by the narrator, you just have to accept that most Chinese web novel authors have intelligence deficiency.
I'm a fan of this genre so if there were more chapters I'd probably continue to drudge through this novel and keep nitpicking on it every few paragraphs (I felt like I wrote at least 5-6 comments per chapter.. new record).
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tl;dr: This novel is trash. The only thing you'll get out of it is being annoyed about how slow the pacing is, and the endless info dumps. Seriously, you'd think they would end by chapter 10 or 15! Nope, this author has managed a new record, info dumping for 32 chapters straight. I'm going to go out on a (very short) limb here and say that they will continue doing so for the next few hundred chapters. This is very clearly their writing 'style,' if it can be called that.
Action! Nice! It's definitely my cup of tea. The story content is interesting, although I'm a little curious and confused why the demon king wanted him in the first place, and I can't wait for everything to be unraveled! Keep up the good work Mr. Author!
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webnovel is getting wild these days. bad translations and tons of useless monologues that take up space. listen i need quality novels on trial read, not trash. i could literally pick out the best ones on the site and do a better job. its been months since we've seen quality novels make it and not be drowned in garbage novels