So just pick this book. A great premise. Really want to know how the MC gets through his early predicament! So far the pace is good but a little frust at times!rating
Hi, everyone!
I've already read the first book of this novel in Italian language and I really Love it!
I can assure that the story will gets better and better even if it starts a bit slowly, it has a truly unique plot so if you are looking for something different give it a try!
I think it's a must read in my humble opinion! :)
read all published chapters in one day. very smooth writing and very good story.
So this is another Apocalypse novel where the mc is a naive idiot that gets betrayed by people he tried to help.So he turns bad and gets revenge by hitting phat ass.So mc sets out to get a harem while basicly eating zombie brains for power.
Unfortunatly, the author tend to spend half of each chapter having the Voidwalkers making a bunch of reference to popular games and anime, and most of the rest describing the female characters in great details (especially their legs).
I'm afraid this got boring fairly quickly.
Now I'm enjoying it and i hope he doesn't drop it
As of chapter 14 this looks really promising. Keep up the good work.
Awesome romance .... not less udivitelny method to become a writer and type a lot of words ...
an unexpected move, it is significant. But it is possible that the author had such a cunning idea, so that later, to write something more intriguing.
It only remains to wait!
This is just a copy pasted novel. That too is a disgusting read, only read if you like beta mc he's such a loser despite him being a traverser god knows what his age is and even after having a system he's such a sissy that blushes whenever a girl talking to him in a forceful manner. As I said this is just a copy pasted novel the author didn't even try to correct the grammar mistakes made after MTL you'll frequently mistake genders of characters. Webnovel should ban such people but that's how their business works so can't expect much from them.
It's Good... That's it.
Nah, I'm just joking... The world building here is amazing, yup, really! especially when the author adds up engineering on his fantasy world. But I found something that turns me down :<
The *** jokes are being abused here too much, and I know the author even said that he wanted this novel to be comedic, but it isn't essentially needed to be *** jokes right? it's okay to touch it on and I gotta admit that at first, It was amusing and hilarious but, as time goes by it became toxic to the story to the point that I skip chapters. (Not only that, I am a bit skeptical of the author. Well, you see, he clearly shows his fetishes on as* l*cking, and those big racks of his characters in the story, some *** jokes is a bit too much. In short, I don't want to offend the author but his writing shows his sexual desires, making me think that the author is a single who has not experienced real relationships... Please, author, don't get offended >.<)
And that's not only the reason why I skip chapters. Some chapters are not that necessary to the story honestly, an example of this is the longest school entrance arc that I had ever read, yes the point of this is to add more and expand plot lines but man.
Well, the start gets me hyped because of the uniqueness of the story, and I don't want review it fully because the story clearly isn't in the climax yet. But I do hope that the author improves the things that I've pointed out. it'll make the story enjoyable to read.
There are many potentials in this story, I'm a writer too not here but on Royal Road... I am the same as the author who wants to improve English (well I want to improve my English grammar) and share our fantasy to inspire others.
There are still good and fun or positive things about this novel, and there's a lot! my stars wouldn't be 4 if it isn't that great, right?
But, fellow author, keeeeeep up the good work! and continue to inspire others!
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It's a good book. The only part that left something to be desired was the MC's personality, but we can't forget that the book has just begun. I mention this point because in the first life the MC didn't retaliate knowing his brother was trying to kill him? Let's be realistic: who will allow themselves to be killed just because the killer is family? I felt that this part left something to be desired. Another point is the MC's lack of ambition in his second life, his only objective is to avenge his mother. This was frustrating, I expected a conqueror after reading the synopsis. Also, the MC is smart at times but extremely naive at other times, so I hope the character develops. Don't get me wrong, this is constructive criticism, the novel is amazing, don't be discouraged, it only has this small flaw. It's a hidden gem.