This is good, I enjoying the story. Hopefully author is on good health and can continue but it is alright if you want to take a break. Anyway nice story man.
Hello, how are you guys, I am the author leaving a message that you should read before starting the reading of the novel.
I was able to read a lot of comments and reviews in which it is mentioned that the story progresses slowly. I want you to know that the first part of the story comprises from episodes 1 to 205.
It is the basis of the novel because it was the moment where the characters and the world around them were developed. This was done intentionally because in the next volumes of the novel the story will develop with more speed.
I hope you can understand this before you start reading the novel, but if you wonder after episode 205 the time span between episode and episode will only increase.
Of course, there will be no radical time jumps that can cause plot holes or discomfort on your part.
As for the secondary story that is told, it is very important because it is the course of the world that is changing just by changing some things.
From the civil war in the Frankish Empire to changes in the Byzantine Empire, all history will change.
The Moment I Saw The Romance Tag Lost Interest In It . I was Finding Kingdom Building Novels And Found One But Romance Tag Ruined It All ForMe.
kya plot hai bhai maja a gaya mujhe aur logon ka to pata nahi h lakin mai jarur ye waali novel pakka padhunga .
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Hmm, reading this first chapter, I can see the potential of this novel. The author has a decent way of portraying the story and the worst thing to say about this novel should be the cover. Something more exciting or more eye-catching will retain more reader's to click and try this novel out.
NO POTENTIAL JUST RUBBISH
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I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
very nice krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna krishna
give me more chapters pls. a
Hey guys author here,I don't have much experience in writing so if you have any suggestions or questions please let me know.Thanks for reading.
Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time.
Nothing much to add besides this.