Keep it up author it has Potential and it’s pretty rare for an author to write a story about center backs.
it's nice very interesting and modest i like it
I don’t know what to say about these book but is totally not worth reading sorry if I hurt your feelings author but these it doesn’t belong at all
Shameless author review!New author, tried writing for the first time and this is my first novel.If you're into epic fantasy with a strong focus on characters and mystery, check it out! It follows Kai and Lia, two friends whose lives are about to change as they uncover secrets tied to their hidden pasts. The story starts with a slower build, letting you explore the world, but once things heat up, it’s a journey filled with magic, intrigue, and ancient legacies. Dive in and let me know your thoughts—your support means a lot! ?✨
great storytelling and i loved king's game arc no lie. if they keep adding W things like dis then ima stick till da end. aand yea make the story a bit slow cuz the story is moving very quickly
I like this story, I would like you to continue updating it! I love how the MC is, and I would like to see a relationship with Cynthia.
A good novel.. I am looking forward to its development. And more chapters ?????????????????????????????????
Not only is the vocabulary amazing, so far the story is captivating with a lot of twistscan't wait to get to chapter 100??❤️
Another novel by my man, Astral? Damn, you don't even need to open it to know it's going to be a banger!And after opening it and reading it just a bit... Okay! You got me! It wasn't just a bit! I binged all the chapters overnight! Are you happy now, BAKA?!But yeah, jokes aside, a great story with fleshed out characters and interesting plot. It will both have you at the edge of your seat with its action scenes while also making you question your own sanity when you try to delve deeper into the plot, making it stand out amidst the sea of medicority of the current novel market. To anyone who stumbled upon this piece and then upon this humble review, don't take my words for granted and just give it a try, or spend the rest of your days knowing you ignored your only chance to touch a true peak.
I am liking it so far. The main character is not brain dead . He thinks but he is still making mistakes. Villian is also setting up good . Currently I want more chapters
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Although the first few chapter are mtl with slighty to no edits, it gets better as the story progresses. By better I mean the author actually starts to edit them. I guess the author wasn’t too familiar with the plot for the first few and wasn’t sure which one to translate, so they left it alone for the readers to help correct. Could just be my take tho ?u200d♂️