Just read some few starting chapters and I must say it's really well explained. The chapter one fight was also done so well. It sure deserves a 5 start rating.
I hope that I will also be able to write and explain scenarios like you someday.
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Hello, readers! This is the author, Bummer, speaking. This review is to bump up a little bit of stats (yes I am very selfish. Hate me for it), but it's also to inform some expectations for the novel.
First off, the novel is expected to be big.
Acts won't be long, but won't be short (About <20 chapters or more... I'm not quite sure yet.)
The novel is also expected to be updated frequently so I don't just leave you guys hanging on one chapter! There will be moments where I'll take breaks but that's normal!
The synopsis is intentionally vague and more talkative of the future, so if you were confused... I hope this clears it up... Sort of.
My ambition for this story is high and I hope you guys enjoy it just as much as I enjoy creating it.
Thanks for viewing this novel, stay tuned for more chapters, and stay safe.
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seems like a good book to read its somthing i havent seen before and i like it.................................................................
DISCLAIMER: Careful not to use flagged words, or the WN bot will auto-ban your review! Now, self-review time! (Slight Spoilers) ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━1. What is RPP? MMO meets Multiverse in the fantastic world of Infinite (literally). It is constantly evolving thanks to the incredible AI overseeing it. The gaming system will begin simple and slowly reveal its depth as expansions are released. Lots of PVE, PVP, Combat, Lifeskills, Events, E-Sport, and more! Expect incredible freedom! There is no such thing as starting Races and Classes: every Player finds/creates their own.The NPCs have their own thoughts and aren’t just mindless lines of code. This gives rise to many entertaining interactions.━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━2. MC Jack’ MF O, the one and only! Expect a steady progression propelled by hard work and incredible game knowledge (not omniscient). He is OP yet not invincible and unfeathered by puny common sense...━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━3. Harem and Non-Harem tag?! Yes, both tags are present. The approach for IRL and Infinite will be very different. Games are meant for one to go wild! Still, the focus will always remain on the progression to the top. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━4. 18 +? Yes, but do not expect too many H scenes. Quite frankly, just the language warrants a warning at times. Might as well bump it up to 18 + and have some fun, am I right? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━5. This novel is actually edited?! When you find mistakes, point them out via paragraph comments, and I’ll fix them. I publish every chapter on inkstone then open the published chapter in the app to check one last time for typos. The final edit takes about 10 minutes after every post. ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━6. The author exists?! Yes, I answer comments daily. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! Synopsis + This Review + Chapter 1 = Our roadmap through this wonderful journey together! ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━Thank you all for the support! ^_^v, Your friendly neighborhood Zombie, aka CA!
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I'm usually not into Alchemist books but the cover and the synopsis drew me in at once, The MC is quite likeable in my opinion and highly relatable, considering his attitude and thought process. I'd like to see where this story is headed. Good luck author san!
Started off great, built great expectations, struggled to meet the expectations. Went up the hill and nose dived straight into a trash bin. In all the ending is total and utter trash.
DISCLAIMER: this novel is not your average summoner novel. Do not read it expecting one- expect instead, a generally well written Lord of Mysteries inspired novel instead. Though not obvious at first glance, this novel bears great resemblance to one of my (and many others) dearest novels; Lord of Mysteries (formerly Lord of the Mysteries). This, to me, is not a con, since the author of TGS didn't copy the plot of LoM, but instead used it as inspiration. Drunken Tiger manages to inherit many of LoM's strong points- consistent story development, rich background and predictably an interesting plot. However, one thing this novel did not learn from was LoM's immersive character monologuing. The protagonist of this novel is detached from the reader, and character design is something this novel struggles with.The protagonist of TGS is a reincarnator from, presumably, our time. He used to be a historian (just like Klein!) but unlike Klein, he seems well versed in Chinese creation myth rather than Victorian/Tudor stuff. Xian Ping'an is the classic Chinese MC- composed, handsome and emotionless. It doesn't help that we don't get a monologue, nor do we get any hint as to what he thinks, thus contributing to the detachment factor. As for the supporting characters, I have little to say, other than this. They are very 2D. Drunken Tiger tries to have a diversified cast, but ends up with the same-old. Female characters who are all beauties, beefy males and the joker/clown character, whom in other novels is usually the fatty sidekick.Story development is decent. The novel is well paced, but the lack of monologuing and insights is a hit to the development. World background is great. You could, crassly put, call TGS "Lord of Mysteries, but Chinese instead of Victorian". What I mean by this is that while LoM focuses on a world based upon Victorian times, TGS focuses on a world where Chinese culture is widespread instead. Do NOT confuse this with nationalism. There is no nationalism within the first 40 chapters, Huaxia being a major power is a reasonable development and the author does not go out of his way to praise China. Anyway, the author integrates the creation myth of characters like Suiren and Youcha into the power system- something I find irresistibly charming, since other novels rarely dive deep into traditional Chinese culture, save for a rare few. The way summoning is incorporated into the third myth (no spoilers) is unique also, and I must say, those of you expecting anything like your cookie-cutter summoner/pet novel are in for a nasty surprise, since this novel is nothing like those- in a good way.In conclusion, readers of LoM will be constantly be hit with dejavu whilst reading. TGS is a refreshing take of the summoner genre, and is 100% worth the read.
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It is not great but still decent.
Although it is a copy and paste novel, it is still better than any of the trial novel for this week.........