Hello seniors, As the outer disciple of the Heavenly Demon Sect, I gave myself 5 stars because this is the path all disciples of the Heavenly Demon Sect should take.This junior requests you check this demonic scripture; it might give you enlightenment, and your cultivation speed shall increase thousandfold. As for this heavenly scripture, it might be slow at the start, but it will be very epic.This junior is a beginner disciple, so I will not be slacking and will try my hardest to make this scripture a transcendent rank.This scripture has a lot of leveling, action, mystery, twists, romance, fights, etc.I hope you seniors will take a look at this heavenly scripture.
second review. Highly recommend. This novel is one of best action comedy i have read so far. hopefully this review will help others.
Started the story today, and I got pulled till the premium chapters. I can only imagine it gets better, but I would love you to detail your characters like other stories. I would love to see what you imagine when you think of your characters, the main ones, at least.
There are only a few chapters for now yet the book is quite promising. The fight scenes are all well-written and I really like that the author was able to put some challenges to develop the MC even though the MC is overpowered or destined to be one. Also, the author specified how the MC will get his Harem. That's nice I think. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
Mais uma história sua que despertou meu vício de leitura ?
Although undeserving I’ll be shameless and rate this 5 stars. All stories are unedited first drafts so don’t expect too much from this. I thought I would share these as they are my loved creations and the beginning of my writing journey. I don’t ask that you like this nor do I want praise all I ask is that you respect my efforts if you decide to read this.
This is the first web novel I read, and it seems good.I really liked the idea of the mc acting like an NPC and a player at the same time.I think you can talk a bit more about the mc since we don't know who he is. Though you mentioned some of his character through internal dialogue, we don't even know how he looks. That is why I had to give 4.8 to your character design.Apart from that, I am confused about something. The story has a lot of magus characters and you are saying they are a race, but which race? Are they human?
cool... the death of the mc is very unique because bro died in fire accident nice... I support you new author keep updating this novel I will read this for sure
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Will be ever get a real average faced extra novel who doesn't have anything good except Future's knowledge
From the beginning you can tell that the story will be a blast
A rather fresh take and one I'm not used to but it's really good.