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weird dialogue and surprise world background without explanation. the main charecter is stupid and naive.
all i have to say is you've done it again awesome story just-ackk i love you author sama (´∀｀)♡(･´з`･)(●´з`)♡(｡’▽’｡)♡
Hey guys, humble and shameless author here.I see some of y'all talking bad stuff about my novel and I understand it.I really do, whether it is because I made a mistake or if it's just some of you didn't like it, that's okay.That's fine by me.Whether you like it or not, that's my work, and I'm giving my all to it, doing my best and learning every day to do it even better.And if you don't like it, just drop it, because there are readers out there who like this work, and I see y'all.That's why I'm excited to say that the second arc is being released, and for those who felt lost while reading first arc (The Ruined World), know that the second arc (From The Ashes) will explain everything and set new heights to Kurt's journey.So buckle your seat belts, all who endured the confusion of narration and pace in the first arc, because the ride's gonna be WILD!!!Don't forget to drop your power stones, reviews, comments, everything you want!I'm here for y'all, and I'm not going anywhere, and I'll do my best with my time to release at least one chapter a day.Your support keeps me running.Always!
Arka plan, karakter tasarımı ve hikayenin gelişimi gayet iyi. Yeni bölümün gelmesini dört gözle bekliyorum. İnşallah bir an önce güncelleme gelir.
you should do much as well promise of relating part two of the work soon. wouldn't stop rereading over and over again well done
this story....i don't know about other things but the human aspect and all the conversations are so natural. sometimes the mc is meh(like he used "urgh" 3 times back 3 back) but all the other bg characters are well thought and have a human like personality. for example mike and saya, they are literally like some people i know. and rosie and her seducing is so natural and doesn't feel forced at all. author u have a good Brain just improve in the mc to make the story perfect . lastly i am not a fan of the game(convanant or whatever the name is) if it was real....i would never play lol. i bet it will flop in real life?
Can't wait for the next update! I love this kind of comedy-action genre. I also love the character on this story. For writers, keep writing!
Overall A really nice read. Detailed and eloquent writing, very nice characters and a great world overall. Interested in where the story goes, best of luck.
I have not read a lot of this, however I don’t t think I like it. This man’s motivation is weird, he wants to cultivate to get strength and seems to attribute every problem of his to “being to weak” like he for real says that about anything. Also the dialogue is wack and they talk like they’re in modern era. Also, and my biggest problem with this is that he doesnt have enough hate in his heart, going back to his weak motivation. It seems very choppy like his motivation is rarely brought up and you cant really feel his hate for Heaven. He wants to gain strength because Heaven created his best friend with a short life span and because of this he wants to gain strength so no one can do anything like that again. STUPID! And his dad the so called “Opposer” heavens equal could do nothing, really
I had to stop as MC was a shameless pedophilic tree. Not my cup of tea. Also absolutely stupid. Interesting concept but absolutely boring and sickening.
Overall, I'd say that this is an Awesome book. The story was detailed and very light to read. The wordcounts are also huge and satisfying for every readers. Keep up the good work Author-san