Void_Erbus
104 chapters 5-25-24
fantastic storyline!
49 chapters 8-4-23
The books is amazing and I cannot wait for more!
It's really amazing!! I loved it! Keep it up!!
i am reading the titie The day I kiss an older for almost 700 chapters. But why is it that gone back to chapter 1. I was so discourage that I can no longer read the whole chapters . Please help me turn to chapter 700. thanks.
I wish this would be made into a movie
nice story. keep it up
I absolutely adored it ❤️❤️. This book is an absolute delight; it's gentle, realistic, and full of warmth without any overly dramatic plotlines involving blood or obsession. The main characters (MC) and leading male (ML) have a genuine connection that grows organically. They don't fall in love instantly, but rather, their affection deepens gradually as they spend time together.
Their story begins with a blind date, which evolves into dating, engagement, and before you know it, they're registering for marriage. The ML's sweetness towards the MC is touching, especially when he realizes his feelings and expresses them through asking her to marry him. The proposal scene, where he doesn't say "I love you" but directly asks for marriage, is a heartwarming revelation.
Throughout the story, there are tender moments like the MC admitting her love for the ML while pregnant, and his selflessness in satisfying her cravings, even running out in the middle of the night for her favorite chips. His understanding and respect for her choices regarding the pregnancy showcase their strong bond.
The climax of the ML surprising the MC with a heartfelt proposal during her graduation ceremony, expressing gratitude for her presence and the new roles she's given him, is a beautiful testament to their love. The fact that the ML remains devoted solely to the MC, even when it comes to the love interests in other novels, emphasizes her unique impact on his life.
Overall, this novel is a heartwarming, low-key romance that highlights the importance of genuine connection, reliability, and emotional compatibility in a relationship. The ML and MC's interactions are filled with kindness, understanding, and mutual affection, making it a truly delightful read.
Reading till the end left me with an indeterminate emotion. It's somewhat... Mundane, isn't it? The plot revolves around a competent maid who excels in every aspect, but lacks emotional depth. Although I appreciate stories without romantic elements, focusing more on self-discovery, this one misses that entirely. It's all about a powerful maid completing tasks efficiently, with no personal growth or attachment.
I must admit, the marshal's ending brought a pang of sadness, and I wished for a touch of affection there. And the tacit agreement between the two systems to share the host at the end was quite amusing.
In summary, the story felt brief yet stretched in certain parts. I would've liked to see more human-like transformation or development. If you're looking for a quick read, are impatient for romance, crave a light-hearted adventure, and enjoy world hopping, this might be the choice for you.
XDDD Its a long title
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