It is truly an amazing novel and I would have given it 5 stars, but it has not updated for a very long time now. I still recommend you read it,(especially if you’re looking for a reference on what a good novel looks like) but don’t expect an update anytime soon.
Since it's my story, I have to rate it
This is a great story. I was really into it from the very first chapter, though i did see some grammar mistakes here and there. The flow is nice and the characters seem good enough. I'll be reading more! Good work
The story and the plot both are so good. The describing of the scene is wonderful. A very good choice for the action and thrill story lovers. Looking forward for the baby's skillful future..
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Interesting storyline. the plot is rather unusual. I wonder what will happen next? this is not a typical fantasy story! Please keep updating <3
the story is good and the updating stability went skyrocket becuase close last month? It was only in 50 chapter now 210?. I wish the story development will not bad becuase the stability. But I recommend you this story because it was good!! The game element and the story development and all of them
A good one.
The cultivation speed is kind of slow and realistic, the kingdom building takes a good part of the story, unexpected good battles, a reasonable mc and good girls.
Even though this genre is heavily written about, the author does a great job of framing it in a new and refreshing way. The dialogue seems real, and the world building is well done. Please keep up the good work and continue writing!
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on.The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems:
1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath
2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh
3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes.
I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system.
It’s impossible that a system that allows less than 1% of the population to cultivate with proper resources can go on for long, since granting proper techniques to common talented people would easily allow to create a way bigger force and it’s impossible that no one ever tried.