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This is still a fantastic book to read Im glad ur keeping it going... and I was just wondering if ur looking at the messages on the chapters and taking them into consideration??
After re sending the chapters will you be adding to the story as well or just re doing the chapters?
I like it and am looking forward to future chapters. hope author keeps up the good work.
Typical waste of time fanfiction, that follows the canon with super op mc doing dumb things on the sidelines, if that's your thing then go ahead and read it, but not recommended.
Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.
All it took was 4 chapters to see that story is just hot garbage. The only good points is that they are translating the novel very well and the editing is pretty okay as well.
Now to the bad, we're do I start. First the author summarizes before MC travels back in time in 4 sentences. 4 ****ty sentences. No background, no characterization. Multiple pov shifts that can confuse a reader. No background to base our understanding of the MC and side characters after time shift. A broken game system that randomizes a new players ability and forces them to stay with those stats even if they remake a new character. That's a broken system only someone who knows nothing about how games work and was to lazy to research for 5 minutes.
If I could, I would message the author directly and tell him to burn this story from existence.
Amazing stuff, I cant wait for the author to finish this series. I hope it gets a manhwa adaptation. 10/10, would recommend. Absolutely one of the best VR MMO novels that I've read, the characters are funny, the story so far has been super interesting and it has a very lite vibe to it
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What shamelessness! An author reviewing his own work?
—some reader probably.
Well, this may be a biased review but I hope you stick with me on this one. This book is a spirit contestant in the virtual reality section... and what better way to depict virtual reality than showing something that we humans know and have?!
That's right, dreams... lucid dreams.
A dream where you can bend the wills of reality and you can be whatever you want. That's what a lucid dream is. If you have experienced it, then you're one of the chosen ones! I'm kidding ahaha. I remember, the first thing I did when I had a lucid dream was master the ability of flight and remodeled the world by filling it with zombies and having a fight to the death with them. What are your lucid dream experiences? Share them in the comments and I'll gladly talk about lucid dreams with you hehe :)
This book is a representation of my wish to the future. I know that games are advancing too much these days we typically already have the means to have a VRMMORPG, but accessing lucid dreams is still a far-fetched idea. However! That' what novels are for, and that's why I'm writing this book where everything can be a reality— in your lucid dreams of course.
To explain the concept, here are some pointers.
— Character building at the first few chapters so no catchy fight scenes yet
— It may be confusing and may seem like a mishmash of genres but they all vortex to a single point in the story. In other words, everything in this book is connected so there will be no plot holes left unturned.
— Backstories wouldn't be shown just yet!
— And the last selling point... IT'S LUCID DREAMS! Who doesn't want that?
And that's all for my shameless review. I hope you give this novel a try and I hope you enjoy your stay in the Lucid Dream Server :)
I'd love to give this wonderful author a 5/5, however there haven't been any new chapters for those of us without money to spend on coins in awhile. Waiting for more.