This was where punishment in the Li family was carried out: the Punishment Hall!
If you read wmw, this novel quite similar to it. However this is not copy-paste of wmw, wmw is the copy-paste of this novel since this novel published before wmw. If only the update stablity was good, I would read this novel. However when only 1 chapter is released each week, it makes you lose your interest. I hope update frequency becomes at least as promised, 5 chapters a week not 1 chapter.
It's an interesting story and theme, i wonder how will the worldbuilding looks like, can't wait for the next chapter!Good luck for the author!!Hope this novel could become a hit and continue for a long time!
Very solid work, I like the premise. The characters are interesting and the dialogue isn’t flat, it comes together to make a good story
Oh dear author pls more. I give this novel five rated stars because this novel has made it up to the top 5 novels i love no top 3 novels i love. I wish for u author to have great success with this novel u have all my love and vote but pls post more ❤❤❤❤❤??❤❤
Honestly, I liked it at first but when lily was taken away with the white hair lady, I kind of didn't like her, why didn't I like her? well I don't like it when FMC is taken away and not with max even if it's to make him strong, why not just be with max and grow strong together? sorry this is just my personal review(Google)
I am only in the first chapter but I will still review it.So, the story thus far is interesting as the plot progresses as your storytelling gets people intrigued, but the grammar breaks the moments, unquestionably focus on your writing as it may cause the readers to lose interest quite fast.Tip - there is something called 'showing, not telling', you don't tell your readers, you 'show' them.Example, you don't write, "He is angry," you 'show' them, by "He gritted his teeth," the readers will 'feel' the emotions of the characters by reading through, just saying "he is angry," doesn't excite anyone, but a pretty good novel.Pretty short for my normal reviews. Be optimistic, that's what a Novelist strive for.
Writing Quality:it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.Story Development:I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.Character Design:The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.Updating Stability:Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.World Background:For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
Okay, no romance but I love this book keep it up author love your work, great job for jotting this down !! Love the characters and the description keep this up, I highly recommend this novel.
Excellent start-up. Especially the setup being outside The West and East. This is reality merging with fantasy gradually, with like 4 mixing systems. Nice.
really good story and please author continue
I rather enjoy the pace at which this story takes place, as it is at the time of writing this review. It gave me enough info of the setting and characters to be intrigued in a succinct fashion, character descriptions and the general language used is creative and entertaining, and the scenario posed in this story is thrilling and totally unique to me. I fully intend to keep reading as updates continue.