Great writing! I loved the characters and the story line. I’m ready for the next installment
You're killing me!!!
Hello! I hope your going ok with your writing. Please don’t be disheartened. I hope we have some more chapters soon ?
I'm sure CIara will get her wolf and find Orion will regret everything!
Zoey, what are you thinking, Man? why you said love is nothing....you'll be sorry when.you fall in love with someone and you get lost your mind bout her
update pls
Great book you have here author. I hope you can update everyday.
well, I must say the little boy is surely Lana's and the old stranger. Her transition to a CEO is well portrayed, one of the best stories so far. I see an enemy coming–Sarah; How could she think of that about Lana? she's clearly jealous, she probably brainwashed Donoovan to divorce his wife.
I need to talk about the worldbuilding in this section because the author is doing something really clever with contrast. First, the Han villa. Song Enya walks in and sees 'sleek, spotless floor-to-ceiling windows,' opulent chandeliers, a walk-in closet on the FIRST FLOOR because 'it's more convenient.' And then her room—a compartment with nothing but a bed, cramped, with a small window looking at the garden. The same villa. Same property. And yet these are two completely different worlds. Then you have Di'an International school, and the way the author describes the entrance scene is pure cinema. 'Several more cars pulled to a stop behind them.' The other students 'walk close to the roadside, giving a wide berth and leaving a large empty space in the middle.' This isn't just a school—it's a social ecosystem with its own gravity, and the rich kids orbit differently. The classroom itself becomes this microcosm. You've got the crowded aisle around Jing Yuanxi, the quiet corner where a boy reads by the window, the red-haired boy pushing another pale-faced boy out of the classroom. Every square inch of that room tells you something about power and hierarchy. And the video on the electronic screen—late afternoon, alley outside school, unclear footage but unmistakable violence. The author doesn't even need to describe the beating in detail. The fact that it's playing on a classroom screen, that students are frozen like statues, says everything.
I loved it
This story was amazing, I enjoyed every part of it. Those who complained about Ashley leaving David, chill your pants. The Author separated them for only one chapter and you are here complaining whiles you read stories that main characters are separated for almost 50 chapters..... Well done Author.
Amazing... Loved it so much